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Ok, first, thanks for the review. Now then, how does anything you say reflect in my novel? Where have I depicted him as a hero? How was his family 'angels'? In fact they treated him as a cultivation tool. Next your tirade is based on your opinions, just because society has a lot of negatives doesn't mean there's no positive side. So you liking R.I doesn't mean every novel should be like that, and besides those 'Angels of peace' that you hate, who do you think they are fighting? Them fighting guys with qualities that you have listed makes it the same as R.I only that you're reading it under a different perspective. That aside, your review might mislead someone to think different of the content. So to anyone reading this, the novel is about a boy with mysterious origins. At first he might come of as uninteresting but that's more intentional as in later chapters, he's slowly learning who he is and showing more emotions. It's important to note that he is not arrogant and cold but rather uninterested in things as unconsciously, he knows he's above them. The first chapters are not that good, but that's because I'm a first time author with zero experience, but it gets better the more you read, this might personal bias.
I did say the body leaves behind the soul, so technically undying, as they can somehow acquire a new body if they so wished
The only thing you can say I copied is the opmc living a secluded life with op beasts. Apart from that, what else can you say I copied? And instead of just saying it's boring, can you please tell me what I need to change or how exactly you found it boring.
Yes there are other habitable planets (stars) as they are usually called, I don't want to screw up by saying the exact size as someone with physics knowledge might spot a plot hole that I don't even know I had, so I'll just say the stars are bigger than earth, the composition is pretty much the same as earth, yes satellites exist. Of course they are habitable. Does he need resources? Yes there exist powerful entities living in the void. Hope that answers your questions. If you have any suggestions or questions please let me know.