The story flows from chapter to chapter which is refreshing. Enough details are given, so the settings are clear and easy to imagine. The characters are okay, and the MC is endearingly silly and entertaining. The descriptions and instructions of cultivation are also easy to grasp, which I appreciate since cultivation stories are a bit intimidating. Overall, I'm curious to how the MC will develop in the future. Nice!

I love me some deserved face slapping

'Bob' is indeed as generic as it gets. And I use it quite alot lol

I like this height :D

Thanks for the review! 😊

I had a clear grasp on the setting and greatly enjoyed the descriptions of the city! And the plotline is straightforward, which I appreciate, though this makes me more curious about the states outside of Benma lol. Something that was unclear to me was the class status of the other characters. Maybe this will be explored later in the future, or maybe I just missed something? But for now it's unclear to me whether they hold important titles in the city (if there are indeed titles or ranks of sorts in the story) other than being the head of their affinities. It's an interesting story, however! There's loads to discover!

Yo...yoooo? Seriously, I'm not kidding, the codename 'Bear' will appear in my story as well! 'Bear' seems a common alias but still, the parallels...lol!

Thanks for the review!

I see! Thanks for the reply author!

Acidic sludge, eh? Interesting.

Hey, so I have a chapter with this exact title lol

:) I like

The writing quality is ok. It sometimes switches between past and present tense which is a little startling, but it doesn't subtract from the overall plotline. The story is easy to digest but some of the scenarios are wordy. If the grammar is cleaned up and the sentences are a little more compact, the reading experience will be more enriched. Also, it was a little difficult to picture the city setting as a whole. But the characters are ok. They're still developing, so I don't have a favorite character yet (but I do dislike--in the sense that I am enjoying the plotline--the ML. He's just doing what he needs to do, but, like, still...). There's a lot to look forward to.

I thought news about Kevin Smart's actions against her family was widespread? Or is that just only in her neighborhood?

Can the ML be saved at this point? No.

Get. Away. From. Her.

It do be like that sometimes

Working two to three part-time jobs while in college? That's really rough