Review Detail of McWms99 in Saving that one Great General

So firstly, i love the idea and premise of this novel. As it just makes everything seem so interesting. Secondly i have to say i love the pacing of this novel, the chapters aren't too long and end in a way that is inviting to continue to read. Some stories I've read just drag in certain chapters and become almost a struggle to read despite how interesting it may be. The MC has enough knowledge to have an advantage but has enough things to learn to keep the reading fresh and exciting. Great job author!