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Thanks for reading the story and sorry that I couldn't reply before 3 years have already passed. I hope you also like the newer chapters. Also I'm hoping to do a few time skip, as this will become repetative as they are stuck in a shelter for an year. Can you let me know what you think about having a few time skips, after having so detailed description of each day? Thank you for your support it helps a lot.
I wanted to acknowledge the comments that I forgot to 3 years ago, hope you can forgive me for seemingly abandoning this. I'm doing my best as a non native speaker, and as a shy socially awkward person, I have trouble writing the recent more slice of life stuff. I hope you can give me more insights as per how I can improve. Hope you like the chapters that are to come.
Thanks for the review, I know I'm 3 years late but still wanted to acknowledge the few comments which I couldn't. I was having a lot of stress due to family and school matter hope you can enjoy the newer chapters. Also if you got some critique please let me know. Hope you can forgive me for not writing for a while. Thank you, reviews help a lot.
And it would be appreciated if you can point out some more things like this, I didn't took this novel that seriously at first so their should be many more things that won't make any sense scientifically, I wouldn't want that anymore and I don't have the time needed to reread fix everything because of my study. I'll do this eventually but, a bit of help would be appreciated. I'm still not very great at writing anyways.
Thank you for pointing that out I should have looked it up before. I'm changing it to what it supposed to be. Thank you again.
I had done a little mistake, that wasn't the great war but the nuclear war.
Not everything have been radiated here, there is still some fish and where Jakub is the radiation is somewhat low, so the crops aren't effected that much here. The normal trees and animals endured the most effects. The crops most likely have been taken care by farmers if the farmers were alive. And before you ask it, no human survived the mutation, so no mutant humans here, though some humans are still alive because of their location as, not every nations have participated on that great war so, there are some areas with very low radiation. And one last thing, most of the animals who were not mutated are hidden so that they can survive. You will have the best odd of surviving a year afterwards in this story if you are in a submarine as, the seas and rivers are the least polluted areas for now and so the safest food other than crops and some isolated fruits they are the safest food. But after this year passes and if, you aren't dead and in a submarine then you are pretty much screwed. If someone have a way to isolate their food source and survive the mutant creatures, only then they can survive. Sorry for bad English.
The way the story flows and the dialogues are put into places it gives a sense of mystery, reading this makes me wanting to know more about the incidents much like the mc, the world is put together in a very intersting. As the first novel of your, author you have done a fantastic work. You should keep it up.
I don't really know what to say. The way you put everything is just what I like in a story like this. The back story of the main equipment of the mc, mc being someone who is despiced by others, and giving your readers as much knowledge that they can think of a flow but will not be able to stop reading. I will say you are great at what you do.
Your narrative choice is excellent. The way you introduced the mc was great and easy to visualise. The description is great and the character of the mc is suiting. The thing I liked the most is the relevance to the title, not many can achieve that. The only problem is that sometimes you make some grammar and spelling mistakes, though those doesn't effect the overall experience.