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1_0Rawkth1_0

1_0Rawkth1_0

Lv14

I exist, I need not explain the rest.

2020-08-07 Se unióUnited States
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  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_03 months ago
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    It's a novel with plenty of potential and I recommend people give it a chance; however, I'll admit that it does need better pacing and more detailing of what's going on. I believe the author can make this an enthralling and entertaining piece of fiction and can't wait to see where they take it. The descriptions are really vivid and imaginative, the author knows how to describe the actions with quality in mind when they do detail their work. The author has just as much potential as this novel for growth and I'm equally excited to see them improve, advance, and eventually succeed in doing so.

    Este libro ha sido eliminado.
  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_08 months ago
    Publicado por

    This is one of the best novels I've read on the platform, the pacing is good, the investment in the main character it gives me is nice, and the tension and build up of the story is amazingly good. All it needs is more chapters and a few grammar fixes here and there for me to call it a 5/5. Good job on this one Author I'm expecting more cool things out of this and from you, keep doing what you're doing 👍

  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_0a year ago
    Publicado por

    Overall a good novel, I can't find any issues with it, the story's compelling, and I'm interested in what will happen next. It's still early into the novel but it seems to be on its way to success as long as the quality doesn't drop.

  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_0a year ago
    Comentado por

    I'm not a big fan of Romance but I ship it anyway.

  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_0a year ago
    Publicado por

    It's not bad a few mistakes here and there, but it's well written, the plot isn't bad, and the unique plot device the MC was given seems interesting though it hasn't been fully explored yet, honestly it's only issue is that it likes chapters and the chapters themselves feel slightly short but not enough to were it's a glaring issue.

  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_02 years ago
    Publicado por

    Its's just an overall good read (don't care about the r18 scenes though) it isn't a complicated read and the MC's previous life is pretty much none existent in the early chapters (40~60)

  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_02 years ago
    Publicado por

    I've read better machine-translated A.I made novels, and the 'author' self-rated 6-7 times literally the only reason it's so highly rated lmao.

    Este libro ha sido eliminado.
  • 1_0Rawkth1_0
    1_0Rawkth1_02 years ago
    respondió a okmangeez01

    Theirs nothing in any of the comments though (With the link) Just talking about the link, you should put it in the Author's notes so it won't disappear. Webnovel might be deleting it thinking it goes to a competitor site or other business or scam or whatever =∆=