DespairHope
- 366 - Are you in Despair because of Hope? or Are you in Hope because of Despair?
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Hmm, the plot is too forced because Hachiman is not shown to had excellence in chess and yet he's stomping this people who are literally in a chess club and the execution feels like a game, you know low level one's to higher and higher leveled player. well even if Hachiman is indeed good at chess because we know his analytical ability is good, this execution is just not good. First it's following the plot of that other fic and then just changing the outcome, so why follow it at all when it's just going to be "oh I dropped it" "You clearly dropped it on purpose" It doesn't have any meaning at all other than showing that yes he is Hachiman, now this wouldn't be so bad if we hadn't already have an established act that can be used as He is Hachiman, that is his conversation with Horikita. So what's the use of adding that one.
That's why I feel off, the author is just trying to trash on that fic, hopefully it gained a unique plot to it's own, otherwise this'll be boring and disappointing.
Her laughing? this showcase of personality is off, hmm, is this MTL? probably because I'm getting weird vibes from this story as their personalities are off and a copied chapter from that one MTL.
It's definitely that, although their self monologue is different but this paragraph is the same.
Even that doesn't make sense though, since his God complex happened because he had the death note, but it seems he doesn't have it here. And even if he had the god complex, he's just going to hide it.
Indeed not even Gods can hurt or do something to Rentarou's lovers.
Hmm, there's too many of them. I guess it's time to burn this world down to hell.
Use everything Bite if you had to, stab, kick them in the b, poke their eyes, fight dirty.
It's been a while since something like this, so you'll get more as long as you keep it up.
Not gonna lie even though I am weak as F, I would want to become a killer in there.