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This chapter was incredible! Great job Author.

Figured it out. This is from the author’s other novel “Blood Awakening…”

I agree. This chapter does not make any sense.

I just realized you are the authors who is writing Devouring Monarch as well. 😁 I read that one everyday too. I must say, I am enjoying this novel better. Keep it up!

Seriously….. come on author. It has been mentioned several times. Thirty thousand = 30,000 Three hundred thousand = 300,000

The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters. The story is amazing and I’m sad there is only one chapter a day. Favorite novel right now!!!

Enjoying the novel so far, but I feel like the author’s note and the “dear readers” part at the end of every chapter is just to fill the character limit for the chapter. Paragraphs will also repeat. If I spend coins on your novel, please don’t make me feel like I am getting cheated out of coins/ story. Thanks.

Sorry for the grammar error. It should be “lack”, instead of “like”.

Just a suggestion, but Ethan shouldn’t be asking every female if it feels good. He doesn’t like confidence, so he shouldn’t have to be validated by asking that and it shows he doesn’t have any confidence in bed. Last suggestion, but the pet names seem like something he wouldn’t say or at least make them better than generic ones. Maybe saying, “my dragoness” instead of baby. Anyway, your story and you don’t need me to tell you how you write. Just keep writing chapters and I will be happy. lol

I was interested in this novel until it mentioned floors that will have advanced technology. I prefer it to be one setting or the other. Good luck though author. I enjoyed it till here.