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ok ok ima be honest and i’m biased against system novels i find them to be so cliche, unrealistic, and just a crutch to any story. The main character’s mom dying boom there’s a magical cure in the system, his brothers neighbors fish a dark overlord and about to kill the mc boom system convenient power boost. you get my point but…. this story is anything besides that its so well thought out and doesn’t follow the timeline its new & refreshing. My only critique is in the being he got jumped and saw he was out numbered and overpowered so instead of trying to be the op mc he should be training ppl he can trust to have his back just in case THUS enter his harem of girls, his wife’s are less likely to betray him over any dude. but besides that this is a amazing story and highly recommend you read this fic or any of the authors other books they aree so good trust me you won’t regret it just wished he was a machine that pumped out chapters quickly lol. keep up the AMAZING work and i can’t wait to see what you continue to cook 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

ayeeeeeeeee he going to have all the baddies

why didnt aqua use enhancing support magic on the team

thus start his collection of woman and to build his own uchiha clan

damnnn why it feel like this amazing story coming to a end

naruto smack that O put that trash where it belongs on the curb… then proceed to stomp her on said curb

fire