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Honestly there's like no story middle of it and it's pretty pointless it's not even a reincarnation story or transmigration you might as well just have an OC character because the characters memories literally get erased Midway through the story

People only use this website to post ads for the patreon don't deserve a good reply whoever wants whoever sees this reply don't waste your time with the story it's not worth the investment

anything past chapter like four is absolute garbage there is zero plot I've never seen a story that had so much potential but turned into such a absolute dumpster fire so fast

Seems like it could be great but I honestly can't say because there isn't enough chapters to go off of yet and I will gladly give a high review if there is

Literally the worst story I've ever read .................................................................................................................................

absolute garbage fanfic and the author should be imprisoned and killed for being such a bad person

too many issues with the story I literally cannot recommend this

this movie The absent worst character creation and Development I've ever seen in a fanfic crazy thing is I don't even regret reading this because at least I know it's crap my only true regret is not being able to put a lower rating

are you mentally sane this is garbage

literally a copy of duskendale on fanfiction.net the author is nothing but a thief and should have their account banned

absolute garbage fanfic you can't even get past chapter 3 without wanting to kill the author

Absolute garbage from the writing stability wishes for the character everything is absolutely garbage in this fanfic and it's not worth the read

Writing quality /3stars updating stability. /3stars story development/0stars character design. /1stars World background/0stars Overall the quality story background everything just goes downhill and gets progressively worse and worse and worse and obviously the offer does not take any criticism or advice from comments to improve his story and has gotten to the point where he has no one reading his story

Overall story had a lot of potential but by chapter 2 you realize that this author doesn't know anything about how to write their character and it only gets worse as you read

complete wasting my time I mean seriously why give someone reality warping Powers when you restrict it so much you can't even use them then you kill the character off are you retarded

stop using box to rate your trash fanfic

literally nothing to read this should be taken down from the website

it's a garbage fanfic and should be removed from this platform

your not dealing with the average slug man anymore freezer