Thanks for the feedback :)

Thanks for the feedback :)

The green eyes came from the mutation. Did I say something diff in other chaps? Also, good to see you around leo, on my new novel :)

Yeap, is a little redundant I will try to avoid, thanks :)

fixed, Thanks :)

You are right, I didn't like the way it ended too, felt odd to me, I will adjust this later. Keep sharing your thoughts :)

fixed, thanks :)

fixed, thanks :)

fixed, thanks :)

fixed, thanks :)

fixed, thanks :)

fixed, thanks :)

lol thanks I will fix this entire novel in the next month, too much typos and errors.

thanks for the feedback :)

No problem. feel free to always comment on the novel, I really enjoy reading what the readers think ;)

thanks already fixed.

Nah, not edgy. I personally dont think anyone can really be evil/bad always/forever, and the same goes for the characters I write. But everyone has 'phases' in life. little spoiler here, but I think is needed as more reader will probably question the same thing when reading this chapter.

Well, this is my second novel, and I learned a lot during the process, but lets talk about his novel... Its slow paced, the MC will grown from the bottom with barely no advantages, and he will discover how things works along the novel, there is no established system when everything starts, the MC is learning along everyone else, the novel is on Earth during the first or maybe first two arcs, its the growing phase of the MC, and talking about the MC... He is not a dumb MC, but is also young, 19 years, so he is not the most experienced when it comes to schemes/plans (right now), he try to deatach from people for fear of losing them if he grows fond of them, and he is ruthless to his enemyes, a lesson that the apocalypse teached him. The story starts as a normal 'monster invade earth apocalypse', but will quickly evolve in something much more complex. I hope you enjoy the novel, and you can use this review for inquires or just leave a thumbs up ;)

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Its not that he dont care for anyone. He clearly made sacrifices for Frank and he has jane and jonh as friends. He avoids to attach to people (without knowing) because they all die soon or later. Its his way to keep a sane mind shomehow. Also, he gains nothing with the chaos right now, hos only advantage its this bits of knowladge he have. if the info spreads he loses that advantage. but thanks for the feedback i will make those points clearer in the future.