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I mean, in the end this novel is fun to read and to pass by time even though in some people's eyes that it's repetitive or dumb or even lame. Plus some Chinese novels have already done this and they have their own versions and it's not boring depending on how the author writes the scenarios. Plus I'm enjoying this one. And zombie themed stories are rare to come by (that's alive and still kicking since I only know a few fanfics that are zombie themed that are still alive.) And for zombies not being an issue, it's not true since the author could change it at anytime. Like make the zombies evolve overtime like left for dead or last of us scenario. And most of all, us humans can still be dangerous. But this is just my opinion since the MC here can stomp pretty much every opponent and zombies he sees. But people come to read that type off genre and mc. All I'm saying is just, let the author writes what he wants and not pressure the author ^^
Soviet tech is fine as it is since Russia is busy quelling the zombie outbreak. A personal question though. Where's sayas mother? Did she die? Most curious. Also, I would suggest going ally tech first since they're the most reliable for Japan's geography. Soviet tech is mostly used for large continents. Ally tech and Japanese tech isn't also bad since they have more diverse naval tech. Since the Soviet naval technology is used mainly for offensive measures. Not for recon and defensive ones. Also please talk to the sexy nurse XD since she has a friend that's guarding the airport saving what's left of the government I think. And the mc also needs to solve the nuke coming for every country that releases emp. (Dunno how accurate this lore is, but a nuke did go off in the anime to release emp and it screwed the main protagonists.) Much love, from the Philippines. PS. Hope you conquer my country lol would be funny XD
Ngl though, would love to see more types of infantry in the future and the reaction of the people of Sebastian's army XD Also, may I suggest something if it's ok with you? Is it fine to add more types of buildings like a research center or a artillery area/mortar area. As well as high walls to set up a large base? Dunno just rolling ideas on top of my head since the school as of right now is vulnerable to zombies that are evolving overtime. Plus, would love to see more people's reaction and thoughts on this new faction that pops up in the prefecture. Heck the surviving Japanese government would be a nice touch for sebastiann to control haha.
BlackWatch or something close to a Resident Evil sound organization like STARS since most of your soldiers would be wearing black uniforms. (Although I'm tempted to say to call your organization or empire the United Reich just for the fun of it lol) Since Stellaris and warhammer are galaxy empire names. It wouldn't fit the theme. Maybe in later chapters where you'll expand beyond Japan. But for now, maybe the BlackWatch or a name that inspires hope to the people that they'll be a tomorrow and a future. Love your novel btw, found it by random and I love it already. Hope you keep pumping out more and take your time (and hopefully keep it free for us poor users that can't pay webnovel XD) Much love, from philippines
Imperial United Empire Or Imperium of Man Or United Human Imperium Sorry if I'm suggesting a lot since UHE (United Earth Empire) isn't catchy on the tongue XD Anyways I love your novel and hope it expands to other universes once the covenant and the flood is finished. (Like mass effect. Hopefully.) Want to see council suffer haha
Dunno if I should add this as a gimmick lol but thanks for the suggestion XD
Damien the crusader might be an idea since he is a hero to the common people after all. And Damien the black hand may sound good, but dunno how will johnny silverhand feel about it haha. And I think I can give you 3 nickname ideas Damien The Knight Damien The King (of something maybe hacker, or netrunning lol) Damien The Vanguard I hope these nickname ideas might help you out as I'm fine with Damien the black hand XD anyways love your Novel. Been a fan since chapter 1 now and love his journey and saving Sasha (thank you) since other cyberpunk webnovels are good, but yours may have the best potential to be one of the greatest in the cyberpunk genre Goodluck and hope you don't burn out author sama!
Hearts of Ion 4 ohh boy. Hans is gonna enjoy supply issues and an annoyance of how to balance army lineups. And once again love the chapter and it shows Ozpins circle is collapsing as predicted since even though he's immortal and all knowing, he didn't stop the Grimm. Which shows his flaw. Which is understandable coming from him. But it is time for a new change and a new order and the people must unite against a common foe once and for all. And hopefully we get a show of force if Hans show the German march along with tanks and planes that'll scare the other powers. Especially showing off their first naval ships and modified maybe carrier zeppelin lol. Like a war zeppelin from other games. Hope to see that come to life :) (Author pls make me a side character named Tanya >.< But this is just me hoping haha) Anyways love you author-sama! And keep up the work!
Thanks for your reply author-sama and yeah I didn't knew that tbh. And the on the tag part I think are army building and Kingdom building maybe since once he has stabalized everything around him, he would have to rebuild and help the people under his command and hopefully forge a powerful nation once he has a body work with. And for dust warfare...maybe upgrade their communications and propaganda? Because I'm kinda clueless myself and I hope my suggestions would be a help but I'm also stumped on it XD And Hanz buying artillery and SPG is a good thing to know in the future and hope he earns the navy section since I don't think the RWBY had a decent navy at least to my knowledge or the universe itself since I only watched the first season and it was always airships. And enjoy your Christmas author-sama! Hope your Christmas is as awesome as snow falls wherever you are. I will support you with fan vibes hahaha Anyways see ya! Your new fan (PS. I hope some of your questions were answered but Im willing to discuss more of it in the coming Futue chapters)
I think you should update the tags. And you could stick to warthunder a bit more and maybe dwelve onto the base building aspect of your system? Or maybe open the navy route of warthunder. Also I'm curious on what flag will your new Reich be and I like artillery isn't mentioned a lot in this series. Or am I dumb that the RWBY world doesn't have artillery that's decent nor warthunder system can allow you to have an artillery vehicle? Anyways, goodluck author-sama and take care and wish you a happy early Christmas!