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love the story so far!
I also noticed i was treading water at this point. I'll go back and edit the flow of the story as I come up with more plot points.
This is just a rough draft. I'll go back through in a week or so and edit my chapters so the story flows better. Thanks for the feedback.
Just the obligatory self-review! Don't mind me. 😉
thanks for translating!
that was quite a jump... why did it skip ahead so far?
bro... I thought the Mc was a guy. who yhe heck names a girl after an old pervy author?
I hate mission systems.
what a great story