KingsmanEA

the story is too fast paced, the romance came from nowhere and the Author just repeating everything from games to interviews.

Memory charm rebounded of shield spell, same outcome different methods.

Ruined a perfectly good storyline by giving secre access to his Grimoire.

really good story, its not fast-paced or is it slow. It has good story development and the writing quality is perfect 👌.

The newest chapter was better, did you edited after using it? 🤔

I think the Author is using chatgpt, if you look back to the last chapters and his writing now, the difference is not just in the bigger words. His sudden guilt his emotional turmoil and his way of speeking, it all point to different writing technique or different Author.

wasn't he 6ft 5inch now?

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thanks for the chapter.