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for the first time i deny all the accusations on this fanfic firstly i thought you entirely copied the story but now that i have read it It is so different than the actual story. thank you for writing such an interesting story.

don't you think its entirely same the way jin woo killed the snake

mc nothing like gojo. thinks with his dick all the time. emotionally unstable overall a bad character. All the other girls are just cum dumpsters in this fic too so don't read if you like to remain sane.

bro can you at least change the name of the mc from lu ming to something else even the name change will help me read this story. |||||||||||||||||||||||

Those who still read this novel even after reading the summary there is something really wrong with your brain. I imagine that if your own mother or sister gets raped then you will understand what the casually said word (*Tag*) rape actually means when you will remain broken for your entire life then you will understand what it actually means. I constantly remain in fear for my mom and my sisters that whatever horrible things are happening out there don't happen to my sisters and my mom and here a story of it being there is written casually here.

in dxd too it wasn't complete harem as at the end issei married rias.

Harem destroys the plot.

don't you think he is already so overpowered and he still has a need of sacred gear. That's just plain stupid

killing to take other's powers. you do know that he was a single child of his parents.

why

good job

name of raw novel pls

good novel please try it good novel please try it good novel please try it

what sort of hate spreading are you talking about did I ask others to stop reading it if they don't like they would stop reading it themselves. i said "I am going to drop it" in this sentence where did I mention to stop reading something in my previous other comments too i asked others to stop read if I see it's a repeated plot or a story where you have to close your mind to read it

in comparison to your dead ass fanfic atleast I tried something original and the author I commented on has enough experience so he should atleast try to change the plot and do something else for a change. who are you to comment when you yourself wrote something shitty have you checked your own comment section bet it would be filled with all sort of abuses.

why do all fanfics of young justice end up with mc joining them. authors really have low imagination crisis going on. gonna drop it bye.

yeah

don't read bad Chinese translation flash Thomson named lightning thomson