Tristan_8396

I think it is quite good, but for me there is too much psychological / philosophical thinking by the MC like 60% of the novel is him thinking about things. At least it's written well but I think you're abusing on MC and his thoughts. Also (maybe it's bc of plot) MC is always in a shitty situation, I understand that you want him to grow little by little but it is too much for me. For the moment the quality of writing is here and the world building seems good. To sum up it's a good novel but it can be improved by a lot !

A big AI copy paste, whether it's for background, plot or characters. I read everything, not worth the time + AI writed so 2000 characters for 200 of real infos

these days, chapters seems like fillers, I get that we need to understand the pov of all differents parties involved but 1 chap per pov seems a little too much... Anyway it is still a good novel but I'm worried for the rest of the story

I tried, it was disturbing and disgusting normal people dont read at all please (for your mental safety, i really want to puke)

It is a good fanfic, but not perfect. A good world building and originals arcs. I think itlacksk character depth, especially for the side ones. Even the MC is like only training, goals, and schemes for his benefits, so it became boring after 200 chapters.SPOILER afterMeiko's death was really disappointing. It locks in the MC and doesn't let him have any character development. Even if the author can still introduce it later, it'll stain with the first 200 chapters and this decision to let Meiko die. All in all, it's a good attempt at Naruto Verse and rather well-researched, but the direction taken by the author leaves something to be desired. If you want to read a kind of unsentimental, well-written robot with "original" powers, go for it.