I will not have a superhero suit, becaus he will not be a superhero.

I will not spoil you, so I will dont answer you, I will just say you that I always want a good story with the phoenix force but there is no in WebNovel so I decided to create mine.

witch one do you like more: 2-

witch one do you like more: 1-

I loved the Abed Nadir reference Revenge of the Geeks

Hahaha🤣🤣🤣😂😂, Dude, we can tell you're exhausted. I will try to keep up the novel

really? it's hard to read?

huuum, nice question, i'm not sure i doest think about

haha yes it's me, ty for your comment

Haha😂

Well well well, budy your story is something, it's surprise me to see its you first story, your novel can really be Something, but you need some help, you chose to merge all the MCU and the Xmen, and I think maybe the Fantastic 4, it's a risqued choice, it's will not be easy to make all coherent, you will need to use your brain on top of you imagination in your work, but you have talent, i saw it right away, so I will tell you the mistake to avoid : 1- No harem, that it's for teen in heat 2- dont make these things easy for your MC, he must fall to walk, he must burn himself to learn fire, it's not because he wants a girl, that this same girl will be inexplicably attracted to the mc and fall in love with him in 2 chapters, in fact it would be good to put a little freshness and reality in the story that the mc sincerely love a girl and get rejected and heartbreaked. 3- make a real development for your MC, and I dont talk about gaining power. 4- it's very important to make second character good background and underline intrigue, dont make the Story only in your MC. 5- take risk, love your work. 6- never apologize, never argue, never explain, there will be a lot of idiots who will be mad at you for no reason, if you answer them it will make you the stupidest of all. 7- stories are adventures that entertain us, great works are lives by which words transport us to their side (Harry potter, Hobbits, Lord of the ring...), make the difference between the two, and choose your side. 8- important, at all costs remain professional you can quickly get carried away and turn a story into a phantasm of the author, almost 80% of all the fanfic in this site are poor guy's phantasm. 9- Good luck budy, you will need it.

yeah i try to translate my poem in english bug's its too difficult for just a correct bilang

There is a reason, ty for the reviews

no worry about that, my MC will not suddenly turn after a miraculous discussion or after years of discussion / moral lesson or whatever into a hero who seeks to do as much good as he has done harm, my MC will not become a hero in principle and has pure morality, however his divinity will force him to appreciate and find a certain joy in living, he will gradually find a certain peace and inner balance, but it will only be thanks to his divinity, whether it is the ancient one or Jesus no word with the purest of intentions will just make him think, I have already done in redemption in my previous novel that I invite you to read.

thanks for the review ^-^

its just for two years, loki had send to the elf kingdom at the years of 20 and he still there for 1 century

thanks for noticing me, I want say unicorn hair

his divinity are composed with a unique energy you remember when Odin try too try to understand with his OdinForce the column of light in chapter 1, but that he did not succeed because this energy was unknown and unheard of? and when you will learn his divinity you will undersntand why he can't do magic i name this novel the 'oneiric' because a reason

thanks for your reviews, my MC is little narcissique in the way who he is not arrogant he just consider humain in his last life like as a slightly evolved primate capable of the best but still striving for the worst, he has become a misanthrope and unfortunately without not realizing that stay in this new life as well, and the fact that the Asgardians or even elves look like humans except for a few differences doesn't help.

dude i don't défense my mistake, it's not a mistake