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Sloth_Incarnate

Sloth_Incarnate

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I just like to make stories that make me feel good and proud about what I write.

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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate6mth
    Comentado por

    Is this multiverse?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Energy
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    I Am Energy In Dc
    Cómic · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate7mth
    respondió a Hiddendivine

    I don’t actually like many of the Main characters of Naruto ( The Main 9 or so) but I really enjoy the world and its past. I also like the past characters more. The previous eras are just overall more interesting to me. And finally I feel like it challenges/forces authors to not follow the plot of cannon. It basically forces creativity in fanfiction. So any story that is set before cannon is an automatic plus for me.

    Ch 2 Awakening
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    Naruto: Chronicles of the Fallen Realms Demon
    Cómic · Hiddendivine
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate7mth
    Comentado por

    The idea seems cool but it’s way to close to cannon for my taste. If it was duringy other period in the world I would be all in. Goodluck tho!

    Ch 2 Awakening
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    Naruto: Chronicles of the Fallen Realms Demon
    Cómic · Hiddendivine
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate7mth
    Comentado por

    You really have a problem with going into unnecessary history lessons.

    Ch 3 Shareholding of the Colosseum
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    Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale
    TV · marcoo
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate7mth
    Comentado por

    I feel like none of the characters have a personality, even MC. Their has been no interpersonal connections shown at all. Everything is very robotic.

    Ch 10 A different Path!
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    Naruto: A Different Time
    Cómic · DesMark
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    Umm, I really hope the MC gets his scheming nature back, it’s what made him interesting. Other than that he’s basically the same as every other si.

    Ch 25 Part 25 - Robert‘s Rebellion
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    Lannister's Sin of Pride
    TV · Cedric_7512
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    respondió a like_12

    Not the story, just this fight

    Ch 862 Argument
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    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    ‘Stuck in illusion’ is such a boring trope. Love the story overall, this part just isn’t great

    Ch 862 Argument
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    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    It’s starting to drag

    Ch 861 Regaining Momentum
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    Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
    Oriental · LazySageDao
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    Option 2

    Ch 15 Story poll #1
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    Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki
    Cómic · Unknown_To_All
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    You keep saying 2D but it’s a FIVR game, so it would 100% be 3D

    Ch 1 Start
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    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
    Otras · Unleashed_Echo
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    respondió a Sloth_Incarnate

    The og plot I mean

    Ch 6 Ruining the Name
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    Tales Of Demons And Gods: Reborn With Nie Lie's Knowledge
    Cómic · noname_marco
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    Original Timeline pls, no reason to follow the plot.

    Ch 6 Ruining the Name
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    Tales Of Demons And Gods: Reborn With Nie Lie's Knowledge
    Cómic · noname_marco
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate9mth
    Comentado por

    Is their gonna be a timskip soon? Or is the whole story about them at 7?

    Ch 27 Chapter Twenty-Seven: Izumi III
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    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Cómic · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Comentado por

    Wouldn’t Naruto’s family name still be Uzumaki? Since his father isn’t in a clan and Kushina’s Clan takes priority over his. Also it wouldn’ be to surprising if Minato took on her family name.

    Ch 25 Chapter Twenty-Five: Multiple PoVs
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    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Cómic · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    respondió a Refraction25

    Nah, not on Reddit, but I understand the sentiment.

    With radiant smiles, my parents shower me with compliments in every possible way, but they wait for me to speak. Joining my hands in prayer, I thank the God who gave me the incredible opportunity to be reincarnated quickly.
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    Naruto: Self-Evolution
    Cómic · SharonMeuToba
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Comentado por

    Do you have extras chaps for this story on your pat-reon?

    Ch 20 Chapter Twenty: Minato III
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    Naruto: of Shadows and Sharingans
    Cómic · LuminouShadow
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Comentado por

    I like the idea of the story, but this might be the worse team comp and reasoning for teams I’ve ever seen.

    Este libro ha sido eliminado.
  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    Comentado por

    All this comes off incredibly forced

    Ch 6 The Triumph of Bonds: A Battle That Forged Friendship and Strength
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    Beyond the Limits I Became a Ninja in Naruto
    Cómic · Bruno_oliveira
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  • Sloth_Incarnate
    Sloth_Incarnate10mth
    respondió a Corwis

    Lol, okay

    The entire situation was just like how young whippersnappers thought that communism would work under their hands because it was never done properly before, while the older generation who had lived it hated it to the core and never wanted to see it again. 
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    Guild Wars
    Juegos · Kotario
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