Sloth_Incarnate

This story is just kinda racist and seems to have some touches of far right politics.

But what about the infrastructure to make that stuff. That’s billions of dollars, even a daimyo would be skeptical. Especially for something so unproven. And also, making the infrastructure from the ground up will be a challenge in its own right. Just cause you know how to make something doesn’t necessarily mean you know how to optimize its production. Unless they aren’t trying to go industrial with it.

Is this multiverse?

I don’t actually like many of the Main characters of Naruto ( The Main 9 or so) but I really enjoy the world and its past. I also like the past characters more. The previous eras are just overall more interesting to me. And finally I feel like it challenges/forces authors to not follow the plot of cannon. It basically forces creativity in fanfiction. So any story that is set before cannon is an automatic plus for me.

The idea seems cool but it’s way to close to cannon for my taste. If it was duringy other period in the world I would be all in. Goodluck tho!

You really have a problem with going into unnecessary history lessons.

I feel like none of the characters have a personality, even MC. Their has been no interpersonal connections shown at all. Everything is very robotic.

Umm, I really hope the MC gets his scheming nature back, it’s what made him interesting. Other than that he’s basically the same as every other si.

Not the story, just this fight

‘Stuck in illusion’ is such a boring trope. Love the story overall, this part just isn’t great