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Chidleba

Chidleba

Lv10

Just a new Author on the rise.

2019-02-06 Se unióGlobal
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
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    I'm enjoying the story and thanks author but..... you seem to be going after a lot of praising the MC in your style of writing. you are slowly leaning to the way other trashy novels keep dragging the story. The story is flowing with a slow pace and dragging so please don't add more and make it unbearable to wait.

    Ch 187 Trial of Strength
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    finally the chapter that reveals the truth

    Ch 161 Rubicon
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a BrewingFantasies

    the author said he was 27 years old before he died and reincarnated....the thing that annoyed me was him bothering about having no toddler friends....MC...at your age...not possible

    Ch 1 DU CHAN!
    Martial Transcendence
    Oriental · ChanduGod
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Publicado por

    I read until 33 chapters and I have to say that this is the slowest novel I have ever read. You basically defined the meaning of slow. I don't mind slow pacing but a slow pace without any conflict or plot is so boring that I felt like sleeping after shortly waking up in the morning.

    Epic Of The Demonic Sage
    Fantasía · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    The part of seeing many world's that others haven't seen can be a great set up for the MCs character and wisdom later on...

    Ch 7 The Thousand Threads
    Epic Of The Demonic Sage
    Fantasía · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    Author....it was going well until this chapter. Why would you give him all the abilities and still talk about how other MCs get more powerful abilities. The three divine abilities were already enough but since you wanted a foolproof MC that acts like an MC of any story with strong instincts and powerful weapon mastery etc.....why did you say the MC is different. The MC now will all those abilities that you didn't want to explain how he got them, you decided to gift him in the beginning. Anyone can survive with all those abilities.

    Ch 9 The Arrival
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasía · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a Dione_Manon

    can you read my new webnovel called The Homeless Mage and give me your honest review.

    Ch 26 No time for cuddling
    My legendary class is Husband Of Deathwill Sisters?!
    Juegos · Sixth
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    masterful storytelling

    Ch 80 Spirit of Exploration
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    you outdone your self again author....well done

    Ch 34 Only Steel Remembers
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    subarashi

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    magnificent

    Ch 14 Child of Shadows
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    I love you author👌👌👌

    Ch 8 Nothing at All
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasía · Guiltythree
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a TheUnsuspicious

    exactly my point...sigh too simplified

    Ch 19 Your Wish is my Command
    Tyranny of Steel
    Historia · Zentmeister
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    stop there author..... don't make everything about a girl falling for a handsome boy. Just give us a proper MC with a proper conviction

    Ch 17 Immoral Temptation
    Tyranny of Steel
    Historia · Zentmeister
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    let me tell you my thoughts author. Mixing milk and meat is bad because the calcium makes it hard for the body to absorb the iron.

    Ch 12 Production Complete
    Tyranny of Steel
    Historia · Zentmeister
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a TribeOfOne

    thanks again

    The teenager drugged the heavy plastic trash while grinding his teeth and mumbling to himself, "Why should I take out the trash. Does she think no one knows of her relationship with that new guy?"
    The Homeless Mage
    Fantasía · Chidleba
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a TribeOfOne

    I Search the Google. It's a like a wallet that allows people to donate money to homeless people around them

    Jeremy sarcastically replied, "That's why people call you homeless wannabe. How will you understand the struggle of homeless people when you are homeless of your own free will and even have friends who continue sending you spare money on your smart poster."
    The Homeless Mage
    Fantasía · Chidleba
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a TribeOfOne

    Thanks for your opinion. The reason I did that is because I wanted to build the character of the MC for the following chapters

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: Transmigration
    The Homeless Mage
    Fantasía · Chidleba
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  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    respondió a Trojianmaru

    Hahahaah the author took it too far.

    Ch 1 Evil Monarch Jun Xie
    Otherworldly Evil Monarch
    Oriental · Feng Ling Tian Xia
    detail
  • Chidleba
    Chidleba2yr
    Comentado por

    sweet jesus

    Ch 1 Evil Monarch Jun Xie
    Otherworldly Evil Monarch
    Oriental · Feng Ling Tian Xia
    detail