this wasn't bad at all, but if mc wanted to create a small cheap game, he should have gone with mortal combat since the background and characters are all that's needed.

yeah, that would be nice, but the point is not being noticed, and realistically speaking, a lot of people would use dark colored cars cos it's not so easy to dirty.

if he's using clan vehicles, arasaka will know, so painting them black or brown will be needed to not lead to the clan.

your Grammer is great, but now I'm interested in who's badmouthing your language, bro.

I drank a castle-light, and it wasn't that bad, but I prefer juice or tea and coffee more.

this was a nice chapter all in all.😇

I stopped reading in the prologue, but it was that boring, and I'm sorry for saying it, but wow, it was boring with a capital B.

it sounds weird, the part of the poem "the shadows you cannot hide"after saying the other stuff, I would have gone with "in shadows you can not hide" rather than "the shadows."

so, whoever the author may be, is amazing, and even the translator is amazing, 800 chaps of fanfic on webnovel is not something to scoff at.

Alex_Clive, you are a capital G for this novel and your writing, 800 mother f#king chaps... you are a capital G.O.A.T!!!

tsunade can't be a child yet right, she's probably a teen at this time.

the only reason hashirama was able to do that was because of wood style and senjutsu. As for madara, it's his eternal mangekyo sharingan even obito with regular sharingan took control but in this world, sharingan and senjutsu don't exist and the laws of the world are different so anything similar shouldn't effect nine tails that much but there could be some sealing that could effect nine tails here .

I agree it's also safer, and mc can focus on 1 woman at a time, depending on the world.

what happened to the transformers from the guy in horizon zero dawn?

your writing is amazing, and the story is so well written, Keep up the good work.

author make a fanfic about lord of the rings.your talent for story writing is amazing, and those gits who called you misogynistic don't even know the meaning of the word, and your colleagues are ret#rds for judging you.

from now on, i don't support games workshop i support helldivers coz we're not woke or broke, and we're based brah. p.s maybe make a helldivers fanfic,we have to support democracy and stand against the dictatorship of wokeness.