Stormbringer

John Wick is that you? Lol seriously that is one fun fight scene. Coz when it started, all I can imagine is the Boogeyman.😂 I'm a bit bugged by the repeated use of Cyanide tho. It's getting cringed. An alias is only cool when it is used less. His name is Jace right? I can't relate to the mc coz when I picture myself in his position it is disturbing. Calling myself Cyanide is a no go. Bet you will use over a thousand Cyanide til the end of this novel. 😂

Exaggerated.thousands of times advance compare to the present technology? If that's true why would they still use solar panels and common things like a locked drawer which can be lockpicked but the mc gave up on it. Author I'll tell you this, if our tech is advanced even by 100 years you would be seeing flying cars and lots of a.i robots. Don't exaggerate too much coz it'll ruin the mood.

Unrealistic to say the least. A genius of what he is again? Coz so far I don't see him act like one. He knew there'd be traitors yet still act like reckless abandon. No character improvement so far. Mediocre and cringe fight scenes and I'm embarrassed with his 'stop your paws you barbarians' while he is talking about a monster. Ughh I'll still read it hoping for a character development.

So far it's ok 🤔 the only problem is the MC's attitude. He says he's a genius but act like a moron. Maybe it was on purpose for the mc to have a character growth. But right now his antics is one of the most annoying part so far. I expect him to show his genius side as he claimed to be one not his ugly side this early.

I've been meaning to ask this... Merlin is a famous wizard so why did he play melee while using this name? His name is Arthur and yet he wants to be merlin but obviously his play style is melee. What if there's some who used his Arthur name? Wouldn't that be awkward?

I don't understand it. Is he a transmigrator? Or is he a VRMMORPG player? Coz if he's a transmigrator that'll explain the introduction why he's perspiring and feeling disoriented but if he's a player who started a game that'll be weird. The story started blurry I guess the cause is his name. Lol I'm getting Mage is too Op vibes.

This mc is too generous and the characters are very passive. They just accept whatever the mc is giving them without any questions or even little bit of doubt. If this isn't a TGD fan fic I'd say he is running for presidency with left and right giving out top grade cultivation manual like some common cabbages.

Hmm so all that male bravado has been thrown out of the bin and what's left is a beta male who's trying to be a comedian. Hancock's personality in here is different from the original. Oh well can't really complain coz it's a ff.

He forgot. He even forget how dumb he was.always copying luffy's too much effort .you can see he's luffy's bitch in the way he's acting and developing his power. He wanted to create harem while also wanting to be buttfvcked by luffy.

Is this mayer a character of significance? Coz seriously this man changes his name 3 times in this previous chapters. He was laftso then loftso then loftor. You couldve named him fatso instead. I get the feeling that he's the mc here. Then why tf the mc got a problem with using his name vlad instead of the child's? He thought he'd be an alien??? There's a dracule mihawk, von curei , ivankov and so many names that are alike to his name. Author, seriously u can make fan fiction but atleast do a sensible one. The logic in this ff is non existent. Fyi vlad dracula doesn't swear like that. The way he curses seems so modern.