WallFellDown

feel like instead of saying returner, she should say ChongSe Ze, or something, which means returner in Chinese. Will add to the vibe. And then obviously the main character can be like? Returner? What does that mean.

great writing style.

Not bad so far, so I will continue reading. Added to my collection. My only thing is, some parts feel a bit too much of a tell, or the dialogue feels a bit too wordy in some parts.

I think u should split up ur dialogue a tad bit more.

Do not trust it?

You comment on your chapters so much.

Isn't this morse?

wow.

this is too many words for me.

what.