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    executionner10h
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    If you like MC who cries all the time, if you are pathetic enough to read the story of MC who is a slave to the system, definitely read it. I personally do not recommend it, waste of time

    Human Of Rise In Against The Gods
    Cómic · Akasaki_Ryujin
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    executionner1d
    respondió a Brogdawg32

    On the contrary, I found it bad for some reason. I don't think pov's [img=faceslap]looks good.

    Ch 29 Chapter 28: I am not a coward
    Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
    Película · Ax_nevermay_cry
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    Dude, you suddenly turned the character into a 9 year old brat.

    Ch 11 A Paladin's Journey (4): Rise of a King
    One Sword to Rule them All
    Película · TheMystic
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    executionner7d
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    2 years is too much.Naruto mastered in 1 week

    Ch 1 Ato 01 - O Retorno de Uzumaki Naruto.
    Naruto - The Sannin.
    Cómic · zBloodDemon
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    executionner9d
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    Kill this woman, she's so spoiled

    Ch 92 Chapter 92: Konoha's Condemnation and Kumogakure's Response
    Naruto: Uchiha’s Unserious Saga
    Cómic · TitoVillar
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    executionner10d
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    good job buddy. I'm tired of the stupidity of writers who write poems and not stories. The guys write 3-part stupid explanations before starting the story. You're getting power stones for getting straight to the point.

    Ch 1 Chapter one - First day in Highschool
    TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha
    TV · Mr_Fruitless
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    executionner12d
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    It's not enough, they need to be punished

    Ch 151 Chapter 151: Just obediently submit to me!
    Saving Uchiha, Starts by Flipping The Table
    Cómic · JYouyi
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    executionner12d
    respondió a Saiyan_Of_God

    Hahahahahahah

    Ch 15 15. A hotel
    A Ninja in the Marvel Universe
    Película · Story_Teller_229
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    executionner13d
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    This always happens. For some reason people don't understand that giving your character 736 abilities ruins the story.

    Ch 5 Test papers
    MARVEL: Scientific Path
    Cómic · PyteWriter
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    executionner13d
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    Fugaku'nun göz gücünü çal ve savaşta kendini yeniden kanıtlamaya çalışırken ölmesini sağla

    Ch 127 Chapter 127
    Naruto: An Uchiha With A Superpower Roulette
    Cómic · Zaelum
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    executionner14d
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    I hope you will end the war after 32 episodes(!)

    Ch 129 I'll Crush You Into a BLOODY PULP RIGHT NOW!
    Looking Forward to Another World
    Cómic · VALRRR
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    executionner15d
    respondió a blddevil

    fugaku doesn't have mangekyo

    Ch 126 Chapter 126
    Naruto: An Uchiha With A Superpower Roulette
    Cómic · Zaelum
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    executionner16d
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    terrible choice

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Elemental Nations
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Cómic · Fat_Cultivator
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    executionner16d
    respondió a Fat_Cultivator

    It's certainly not unique. Just because you haven't seen it doesn't mean it doesn't exist. You are too assertive.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Elemental Nations
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Cómic · Fat_Cultivator
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    There's a lot of idle talk. It's not worth wasting time with unnecessary dialogues, you need to speed up.

    Ch 52 Kiri acting like victors
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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    executionner17d
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    Do you have to repeat the same sentences 32 times?

    Ch 25 Reinforcement
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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    executionner18d
    respondió a executionner

    Now that I think about these, Kirigakure's Byakugan was the only one in AO, I always wondered why it was the only one. Mukai is kohinata's byakugan. Mukai became a Kirigakure spy for money, and after using him, they killed him and took his eye.

    Ch 6 Uzumaki Clan's Exclusive Jutsu +1
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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    executionner18d
    respondió a executionner

    There was a guy who only had a byakugan in one eye, you can use that too. mukai kohinata

    Ch 6 Uzumaki Clan's Exclusive Jutsu +1
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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    executionner18d
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    My friend Uzumaki must catch the boy called Ranmaru in the future to strengthen his country. He must also bring people from the Kaguya, Yuki, Chinoike and Fuma clans to his village. Chakra armor and sky castle are important. I also need Hachimon Tonko. If possible, bring Might Dai as well. Pakura, who was betrayed, Ranmaru, who has a special dojutsu, and a girl in the sand village, who also has a dojutsu, Yome. There was Shiro, who developed taijutsu on his own. These may happen in the future, but they must be prepared. Kabuto is also there. There are so many powerful people. What came out even with 5 minutes of thinking :)

    Ch 6 Uzumaki Clan's Exclusive Jutsu +1
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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    executionner18d
    respondió a executionner

    The reason I don't want to save the Uzumaki is because they are so powerful and the Uzumaki clan settling in Konoha means Hiruzen won't be able to hold the position of Hokage for as long as he wants. If you're saying Hiruzen doesn't care about the position because he left it to Minato. Minato is a student of a boy without a clan and has no team to run the village. He needs the help of the 'EXPERIENCED ELDERS', so Hiruzen will maintain control and direct the village in the direction he wants.

    Ch 1 The Country is About to be Destroyed, What Should We Do?
    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Cómic · electronatom
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