bamjrr
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Just a Highschool student writing for fun
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bamjrr2mthComentado por"What the—how is this—?" Mr. Negative looked left and right, bewildered, then looked up. High above, perched on the crane was a shadow. Six of his men were dangling off the crane in cocoons. The power he bestowed was useless. Utterly useless!- bamjrr2mthComentado porCh 33 Slingshot
- bamjrr3mthComentado porCh 29 Uncontested
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You should probably stick to one form of showing dialogue. (Person: “example.”) isn’t really a good way to show dialogue, it kinda breaks your attention of the story because it sounds like your reading from a script/play. Stick to just using “” to signify when a person is talking like you are doing with the mc. Having both of those in there is really distracting.
Ch 1 Looking him straight in the eyes...eye? - bamjrr4mthrespondió a Marcia_05Ch 19 Announcement.
- bamjrr4mthComentado porCh 19 Announcement.
- bamjrr5mthComentado porCh 2 An unexpecte trip
- bamjrr6mthComentado porCh 4 Chapter 4
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 14 Chapter 14: Montage Music is needed Pt.5
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 10 -10- Big Brother
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 3 Chapter 3
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 1 Chapter 1- RETURN FROM EXILE
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 9 The Devil's Advocate
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 46 Chapter 46 - The Collision II
- bamjrr7mthComentado porCh 45 Adjusting The Course
- bamjrr7mthComentado por
This suit man😂
Sitting atop a building, perched with his long coat flowing behind him, Spider-Man looked on with solemn eyes beneath his glass goggles, wondering where to even start. There's far too many things happening at once for one man to handle. 'There's gotta be thousands of them. Where do I even start?' he thought to himself, however, he'd get his answer after hearing tires screeching and a loud clash of metals. - bamjrr10mthComentado por
In and* out
I took the subway, exposing myself to more of New York's busy life and the throngs of people that flowed in out of places in a ceaseless stream. Of course I soon found out a drawback of my telepathy.