Erelbrinx

Well he and his father has Targaryen bloodline. His father also went there. I take it as a warning from system that can possibly harm him indirectly.

I would rather read a monotonous writing of only the Mc narrating of what happened than to read these dialogues that is impossible to understand who is talking and when. I didn't expect a writing to be so in chaos.

They captured gang leader easily but than he escaped as easily. We get all that talk about how they can't face the pirates just to be forced to move without horses... It just feels forced.

I mean there are laws preventing wizards from disclosing their magic to muggles too, isn't there? So, it doesn't really affect anything.

The future changed from the day 1 . You can't have 3 dragons and still expect it to play out the same way. That would ruin the story.

Yeah, but you would at least wouldn't do the criticism in front of matriacrh out of respect for her.

Also, the grammer is not bad at all. Not to the extend that you would bother to leave a comment about it.

Since I started reading Mtl, i became immune to bad grammer. For those who complain, I suggest they start reading some mtl.

You would think you need a light for a shadow to exist, right?

I hate mind control. I think it kills the story if used to obtain loyalty, manipulation, and such. It just leads to an uninteresting plot.