Ualer
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So I'm doing a thing. I hope you enjoy your stay.
2018-06-08 Se unióUnited Kingdom
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Ualer3drespondió a BL00DY- Ualer1mthComentado por
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It seemed that at some point during the fight, the tall girl's makeshift seaweed top came apart, leaving her naked above the waist. She was covering her chest with one arm. Behind the arm, squished, the supple fullness of her… - Ualer8mthrespondió a Kevin_Harper_1476
I just wanted to say, thank you for catching my mistakes. Just when you think you've caught everything on a second read I miss an entire placeholder (name) xD I have acted on your comments, I hope you are enjoying the story.
"Why would goblins have a door at the end of their cave…" Pulling up the back of his shirt, Keino his the daggers. "Eh, what the hell. It can't be any worse than a bunch of goblins." - Ualer2yrrespondió a Helmi_Teronen
Thank you for catching that
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Ualer2yrrespondió a bluescarabbeatle
Hi there. I don't believe Rio has called Savina by her actual name, sorry if I made that error anywhere but I cannot see it.
"Neia?" Turning around Savina paused seeing Rio, men and women ran past him flooding the deck of the ship. - Ualer2yrrespondió a TheEvilDragon23Ch 8 It's Just a Formality I Assure You