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I really wish a few things were different. I like this novel, but it sorely lacks detail. Every arc doesn’ get fleshed out enough. Like when first visiting the origin native city I wish it had a few whole chapters on the atmosphere, markets, shops, people and shopping and trading things. Then a whole arc on the different market oppor tunities that the city and the human world that he can use to gain money and trade deals. The worst part of the novel is the mc’s subjects, every single detail that would build up a relationship or positive image of the lord is missing.. instead it’s all the lord is soo nice (just continually says this in differnt ways, instead of mc doing something that would actually make it true) Him selling his perfectly extracted stuff to only one shop was senseless. I really wish it had a arc about shopping around and making trade deals, instead of just one shop and no negotiation. This gets even worse though with the selling of blueprints, which gets worse again with the “negotiation” that happens for the first time. Honestly though it’s a perfect framework to write an amazing book, but it’s missing the details and context… rather just writes summaries for most things.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
HideousGrain
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BL00DY:xD hahah so you are that kind of author. Having no talent but still trying to profit from young inexperienced people who can't even tell that MC is dumb and then put a blame on readers that the book is bad. No wonder each of your books became trash after 100chapters.
The problem about details is one particular fact; Most readers on WN hate it when I start fleshing out everything as I desire. The chapters will be twice the length(even though I already write long chapters), and the content won't change a lot. In fact, I will have to write a lot more chapters for the same story, which annoys many readers since they will have to pay a lot more for the details. Of course, it's understandable and I would love to write more details as well. But there is nothing I can do if the market is clearly in favor of fast-pace and less details in exchange for more story.
HideousGrain:The problem about details is one particular fact; Most readers on WN hate it when I start fleshing out everything as I desire. The chapters will be twice the length(even though I already write long chapters), and the content won't change a lot. In fact, I will have to write a lot more chapters for the same story, which annoys many readers since they will have to pay a lot more for the details. Of course, it's understandable and I would love to write more details as well. But there is nothing I can do if the market is clearly in favor of fast-pace and less details in exchange for more story.
xD hahah so you are that kind of author. Having no talent but still trying to profit from young inexperienced people who can't even tell that MC is dumb and then put a blame on readers that the book is bad. No wonder each of your books became trash after 100chapters.
HideousGrain:The problem about details is one particular fact; Most readers on WN hate it when I start fleshing out everything as I desire. The chapters will be twice the length(even though I already write long chapters), and the content won't change a lot. In fact, I will have to write a lot more chapters for the same story, which annoys many readers since they will have to pay a lot more for the details. Of course, it's understandable and I would love to write more details as well. But there is nothing I can do if the market is clearly in favor of fast-pace and less details in exchange for more story.
BL00DY:xD hahah so you are that kind of author. Having no talent but still trying to profit from young inexperienced people who can't even tell that MC is dumb and then put a blame on readers that the book is bad. No wonder each of your books became trash after 100chapters.