DaoistSuperMate

this is peak. such peak. excellence . peakness

where 4

havent read such shit in a while. makes me sick. .........................................................................................

Rushed wish fullfillment story about op mc that brings many changes to naruto world. ...............................................

bonis chapters for power ranking?

absolutely fantastic peace of work, hats off for the author. --‐----------------------------------------------------------------------------

the more i read the less i understand. this is clearly a chinese fanfiction machine translated . report publisher please for not even giving credit to the original author

more like 10k weak force

he is/i am

A guy created a guy using imagination then he somehow receives very op powers cuz imagination??? Though author tried to explain the crestions backstory so he wasnt just imagination?? (I did not understand what you want ur character to be. One moment he kills a guy just cuz he is annoying and next tries to make friends?) Though overall very plain story, no actualy world or character development. And your writing? Thats no storytelling its more like a statement after statement which feels very bland while reading. You certaintly have a lot of room to improve, best of luck