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This is one of reasons why I hate the concept of main characters knowing about future. Main characters become tunnel-visioned & their reasoning losses logical base.
Now this is world breaking plot hole.
Starting premise was above average & first 100 chapters are readable. But New Plot points introduced after 100 chapters are not interesting. Wishes plot has with above average execution at the start but after Whitebeard-marine war, it was poorly executed with introduction of Kurama. Mc's Ninja Powers of Naruto world are executed well in the initial part (even if Mc is not OP & author has poor Power levels comparisons be naruto world & one piece world, it didn't bother me that much). But Mc's Power progression after 100 chapters becomes stale. Mc's characterization & Character interactions feels more & more cringy as plot progressed.
I think there is a translation mistake here. In chinese, Naruto series is named as Hokage series. During my mtl translation experience, Naruto Character name & Hokage title always gets mixed up.
Hope you complete this 'character growth' arc for Mc quickly & get back main story. Personally, i don't want any Character growth for this Mc, as he was interesting for me as he was before. I read your Black clover fanfiction. Except for starting few chapters, Everything else was very well written. There was no character growth arcs there. Plot progression & Character interactions are enough to keep story interesting. Don't make 'Hero' concept so seriously. 'Hero' is just a Job in the MHA society, just like military soldiers in our society.
Highlights of this fanfic are Character interactions & Mc's cheat. (Hope author doesn't make Mc's cheat too OP. Would be good if there was a restriction on total number of different cards Mc can mirage with himself. Like Maximum 3 Orange cards & 10 purple cards. Something like this). From what I observed from reading author's previous books, Author's strength lies in writing Character interactions. Even here, they are very good (most likely will reach 'Excellent' level with Teacher-student interactions) Plot premise is very good. Plot progression is good. Mc's characterization is very good. Hope author completes this fanfic.