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Besides the Weakness of the DF, a strong enough Haki can beat most DF users for example, Garp, Rayleigh and Roger, this bro has a path to surpass them without a DF so why not go for a more unique stroy?
Don't be a Devil fruit and eat it... Too many go that path, a pure Haki strength route would be the best
nope, be true to a monk character
Nah I am back lol, it's just taking waay longer than expected to go through everything and I have had to make some changes to how I want to progress the story since after reading it I am a bit tempted to edit the whole thing to be better but yeeah will see... But I am just about there, will start releasing asap
Yo! yeah I definitely will, things have just been stupid crazy lately... I have a few rough drafts prepared, its just finding the time to edit them that is killing me lol, but I'll try to start releasing soon again just need to get passed this busy season at work. RIP
How is it that nobody questions the limitless Whisky bottle? Surely that kind of thing is not normal in any way and to blatantly keep drinking from it should surely raise questions?
I am enjoying the book so far but the grammar in this sentence is real bad, Hope you don't mind some advice.. When writing take note of the tense you are writing in and use words in the same tense " Norimitsu is known as the largest Ōdachi -'that has'- ever existed, with -'a'- length over 3 meters and 'a' weight over 14 kilograms, some 'say' that it -'was'- wielded by a giant, some 'say that' it 'was' created as an ornamental (a descriptive word here like 'piece or sword'), but the one thing that [true is] > 'is true', 'is that' this sword was crafted by a highly skilled..." I wont do this again, just though it may help a bit, good luck with writing[img=recommend]
Great Note! I was about to drop!
I guess that a weapon would increase his damage output but I am not a big fan of swords, they are used waay too often imo. So If I decide to go with the weapon route, it will have to be a different, unique weapon like a huge mace or something.
I know, I am already on it lol