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I love your story, but i hate that an entire chapter passed and happen in 4-5 seconds between asking for hinata and ino telling "Right", it let me down, good story anyways, i will await for next chapters so the story can continue. good job
Really?, i tough that they had interfaces and need specific thing or force uses to open, but i didnt know that a holocron can say no to give knowlege after is opened. I know if you are a jedi, you cant open a sith one, and a sith cant open a jedi one, i tough that once you open it, you can do as you wish and can get the knowlege asked, no sassy AI that give you riddles. Maybe i am wrong, i am going to research. It would take decades to palpatine to "resurrect" in the meantime galen can train and decimate him years later. Good story, i will await for more chapters.
wtf?, take the holocorn and force it to tell you what you want, why all the talking, so many riddles and now has a new master xd, why waste an entire chapter on this?
Just show the jutsu before minato start thinking about it, and say that you used that to train your chakra control and in the end created the rasengna. Good chapter.
How approach it? The dude has being training in the 8 gates getting himself trained harder with weights, trained the seal of tsunade, the release of chakra when hitting, the rasengan, and lightning release, he already have everything to approach that lvl of power, he just need time. He knows the lvls of power of big fighters, with time he will be, altough i cant blame him for thinking this things, barely escaped an tailed bomb. Good story like always.
sigh, i will have to wait to chapter 700 to danzo to die, its always the same, the dude leaked the mission and nothing happen, nothing ever happen to him, until the mc kills him draggin it fore decades and letting him do whatever he wants for some reason, he has the biggest plot armor in all fanfics, almost as good as lannisters in the books.
I dont get why he is meddling with that, let them be killed and goodbye
He started interacting with naruto in chapter 17, and since chapter 29, you made an arc 14-15 chapters with naruto and mizuki, that what i mean, sasuke was practicly the reason he started training so hard instead of just his mother, you introduced naruto and since chapter 17 naruto is in almost all of them, yeah his father was introduced, but all of it because of naruto. Anyways i am not going to fight with you bro, like i said, its a really good written ffc, just my expectations were vastly diferent i expected a literally medical shinobi, maybe in the future creating jutsus like kabutos, or poisons, or like you made altough weird mixing fire with medical chakra,now the dude is 4 times more talented than minato, and entrenched in the naruto canon, good luck bro, no offense really, just i entered with diferente expectations.
I really hope 1 ffc where the mc kills danzo and dont drag it for 200 chapters. Good story, a little dark, but good story, i dont know how are you going to take him out of root, there was never a character strong enough in root itself to run away or kill danzo, and learn seals? danzo would never let him, get more powerful? danzo would never allow it, learn or create techniques that woud allow to fight back? danzo would never allow it neither
fk man, not 1 fanfic where the mc is not sucking the main cast. always the same.