No words to describe the headache this caused me. Needs editing and it would be amazing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

It has all the parts required for a great story but can't really shine without a good editor. I really want to read it but every time I tried I can only last a chapter before I get a headache.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

Love it.