Dark_Castle
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Writing for fun. Enjoy yourself. Give me a like if you enjoyed the story.
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Dark_Castle2yrrespondió a 0THeunkown0Ch 23 Function of Chaos Stone- Dark_Castle2yrrespondió a Kotik_Kotik
Please! please! mark any more mistakes you find. It is really difficult to pick my own mistakes.
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Are you a English professor?
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Thank you. I will definitely improve myself.
Although the matter of killing is true, Daniel did have many ways to escape from here and to contact the outside world. He can hack the central computer with some effort and the rest will be easy. Any other person can easily pick up loopholes in his story but phantom seems to have become dumb and lost his reason. - Dark_Castle2yrrespondió a Daoistd9QJcaCh 16 Information Sharing
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Thank you for the comment. And yes the revenge wont be delivered immediately.
Seeing the few broken silver in his pockets Daniel felt the taste of poor for the first time. And this really pissed him off, so he swore his first oath after coming to this world. The vengeful person he is, he will not tolerate anyone who threatens his interests. And when he strikes back there will be no mercy for the enemies. - Dark_Castle2yrrespondió a 0THeunkown0
Thank you very much for the support.
Under Daniels's penetrating glare Lloyd felt very uncomfortable, so he quickly started explaining what happened before, "Who told you to talk to the goddess of their group and much worse trying to get close to her. Jasmine is the red apple in many people's eyes and you became a target because of jealousy. I warned you …" - Dark_Castle2yrrespondió a 0THeunkown0
You are amazing. I did write that line taking inspiration from WMW.
Under Daniels's penetrating glare Lloyd felt very uncomfortable, so he quickly started explaining what happened before, "Who told you to talk to the goddess of their group and much worse trying to get close to her. Jasmine is the red apple in many people's eyes and you became a target because of jealousy. I warned you …"