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I will give this series not a full 5 star as the series still in its infancy. hopefully it can develop a more develop outlook of the world he lives in. the chara? well, to be honest is still too far from my expectations. as he is already beyond my imagination because he reincarnated too much, I can't connect with him. the foreshadowing is thrown too early and too much. it's reveal something that unnecessary in my opinion. but, it was also something that I'm looking forward. hopefully this series will be executed neatly, because this level of foreshadowing need a higher level of plot and development before it can creates a greater impact in the future. good luck [img=recommend][img=recommend]
hey this one is surprisingly good starter. now it piqued my interest. Good luck with your contest. I will try to support you. as now I'm not a frequent reader of this app anymore. but hey, at least I will comeback now and then to read your series. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
good chapter, especially the underwear thingy.
Yes, i agree. This work is actually planned beautifully to have the vibe of being hero. The real ways of hero i think. It's maybe in line with how the heroes made in many literally work. Now this is i called nice webnovel. Not only some rambling chaos writing with a single lines plot that only being thought one night. The real writing work need preparation, a lot of them. 1 chapter a day is ridiculous and bad if you not thought about it before and just go with a flow. A lot of webnovel work now is just like that.
I too love it if he get paid for his work. But, the point is he as a writer do need to enhance his work to get paid or maybe just get it better for his own satisfaction. That friend over there try to help him as he move forward to make it happens. Not that i criticize you, but just to give some people who might think like we as reader don't need to correct however the author way to write his work. Maybe some author have their own way to express their writing style. But this time is not about it. It's more to how to correct thing so it easier to read and how literally rules world work.
This is the main reason i don't like romance in the action genre, especially harem. They took so much space in the story, for their bunch of girl. We care nothing. Because after the girls in the squad taken down by the mc she just the same with other girls. She lost her own character. Then why bother? If you love harem just make harem novel. Don't bother with other genre.