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dudes stats are around what a traditional level 30 would have based off math. He could have no class and would still be overpowered. nobody else has the power to increase stats except by leveling. At this point MC is God as they're only 1 year into the apocalypse and it's doubtful anyone is capable of grinding that much exp since highest grade was an "A" in history and only 1 skill per person. MC is basically 20 people in 1 at this point. Give him healing so he can solo the entire world and call it a day
Wasn't it stated after 7 days the people who couldn't enter tower level 2 would be sent out? What would the point of sending people into the towers if the chance of leaving is less than 90%? Also, dudes stats are like a level 20 person but are only "slightly" higher than a normal level 3. The stats and levels don't seem to be fleshed out properly .
Yeah, its almost like people don't read your story. He had a 20% buff from the title and literally doubled his strength stat when he 1 shot the one 3rd order. Then you explain how he destoryed a City fighting the other 3rd order that's almost the size of a country. If Bai isn't holding back the bridge literally is destroyed by a casual swing in the wrong direction
The story introduces the MC early. It is a human who has healing ability granted by there bloodline. As they lay there dying, it just so happens one of the Lords of the existence happens to reside in a flower they are holding. The Lord of stars is this entity and it merges with our MC. Some fun exchanges occur and the Lord of Stars decides it is in its best interest to help this human along the path of evolution. Absorbing the different bloodlines and abilities our MC grows more powerful with each beast killed and devoured. An interesting concept and leaves it up to the Author to give us an unlimited amount of different ways the MC can be developed. I look forward to the final result. The writing is mostly in first person perspective through the MC's eyes. It can take a bit to get used to as most books on WN are done third person. The world background is fleshed out from the beginning of the novel and given to us in a unique info dump way. I give the update stability a 5 because the Author dropped 20+ chapter right out of the gate. We will see if the Author has any remaining stash chapters or if this is the writing speed then this will be one of the fastest updated books on the site. Keep up the good work.
Your story is pretty good, I would recommend downloading Grammarly for the main PC you type and edit on. It'll help you catch some of your mistakes. You can delete this comment after you read it. I put it in the paragraph comments so it isn't plastered everywhere. I saw your post on the forums asking for a honest review and help with anything we see in your work. Another thing would be to split up the conversations between different characters into separate paragraphs. It's a webnovel and people are used to have one line paragraphs. It makes it easier to read the dialogue between your characters. The dialogue is very well done and when read aloud, sounds like an actual conversation that can happen amongst friends.
I hope you don't believe your aquatic vault arc was boring or too descriptive/narrative. I felt it was well fleshed out and showcased Quinn's progression in magical learning. I was able to read it from beginning to end and not as you released it. Maybe that's why people complained? Don't let people's comments derail your vision of developing a beautiful story. Not every chapter has to be action packed .You're story is well developed and a joy to read. Keep up the good work!