it's a direct translation lol

idk know if that was the best way to go about that

my condolences bro

you wrote that last part pretty well man

this slaps so far man

pretty goog so far vee hrjdjdnndidkdjxb d hd dbff f d d f f ff f f f d d f f f. f f f f f f f g g g g g f g. f f f f t t t t t. t t f t t t.

the best story on webnovel

me who has forgot lawson

thx for the chapter

only thing you need to work on is conveying characters emotions. otherwise this s reslky good story. Grammar isn't bad. this seems like a solid story with potential

i really hate plot armor just make sure it doesn't become unrealistic levels of It

is he not going to eat the stones

and thc for chapter still my fav

would you rather people read here or royal road

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from her perspective he is being tortured by jayden.

its a blatant copy of vampire system but just better but still a copy copy copy copy copyc copy of the chon so I can play it is the best price you'll get a quest game

this is going back to being a vampire system copy

pog man here

really in depth character development. not predictable at all. no serious cliches. logical bit still enjoyable mc. after chapter 20 it skyrockets in enjoyablility. in my top 3 ln this app rn[img=exp]