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Untalented

A talentless youth enters the world of immortal cultivation, what awaits him on this path? Heaven only gifts it's chosen few while all others strive to survive. This is the story of a boy with no powerful bloodline, family, system, nor teacher. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~§~§~§~~§~§~§~~§§~~§~§~§~§~§~~~~§~§~~§~~ What to expect? This is my beginner level Xianxia, that is to say from everything i've read this is what I consider cultivation. As such we will set up everything from the very bottom, and we will delve into topics of cultivation until my brain fries. At first we will take it slow for like 20 ish chapters, after that we will pick up the pace as we have our first real conflict. No systems as that is not my cup of tea, they are fun but remove all tension in a story. No special bloodline, like we need to be able to identify to this person to a degree and humans simply aren't that special. We will start from the VERY bottom, so if you aren't in it for the long haul I wouldn't recommend reading further. Now, my writing isn't perfect, I am not some english teacher, I am just someone that overread and now I can't see myself just reading anymore. If you like my story, please support me via comments or whatever this site uses.

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Disciple acceptance ceremony II

Elder Qez did not simply blast the children with Qi (energy), he looked at the condition of the children as every strand landed on their bodies.

If anything looked off at any point in time he would retract his energy as not to harm the child.

These two kids were not simply tools to be used and discarded after all, they at least demonstrated a future potential that could rival his own in the future.

Currently this was only demonstrated potential not certainty of success and even the metrics used to judge this potential could be biased in some way.

Elder Qez had lived for over two-thousand years, he had seen genius's rise and fall countless times throughout his life, not everyone living up to his expectations.

From an odd death during a mission to open animosity or jealousy, if a genius couldn't overcome such hurdles on their own they didn't have a future in general.

This was no different, maybe they will succeed or maybe they will fail.

Today he simply did one of his duties as an elder with no real expectations for these kids, he simply was too old to believe now.

His long life while bringing him joy over the years also brought with it a heavy mental toll.

'The girl can take around twelve more strands the boy about eighteen' adding more Qi strands to each child he carefully controlled the output.

The girl winced slightly, elder Qez immediately retracted the energy he was sending over before any problems arose.

The spectators drew a breath.

"Did the elder hurt her?"

"What happened did you see?"

"She reached her Qi limit, I couldn't fully test her" elder Qez mentioned this out loud to clarify what had happened.

She had not reached the limit yet, simply the amount of energy given to her had overflown from her bowl.

"Ah good good, she is the future of the sect"

"Would have been such a shame to loss such a good seed"

"The sects future is still bright!"

Elder Qez sighed, he did not see it the same way as them.

They would need to retest the girl in the future when her current limits are exceeded, not that it would matter anymore by that point.

Her current cultivation compared to the other children was around the third stage of Qi gathering.

Most the kids are at the first stage of Qi gathering, while a couple here and there had entered the second stage.

This 'Qi gathering' rank was one way to differentiate between cultivators.

In the cultivation world the higher your rank the more people will either worship you, respect you or fear you, very rarely would anyone dare disregard the ranking system.

From the lowest rank we start at:

Qi gathering, the lowest of the low the weakest of the weak all those inside this rank are considered beginners. Inside of this stage one had to gather Qi to create layers around the body, these layers are generally referred to as a stage from one to fifteen.

Foundation establishment is the second rank, the cultivators in this rank can be considered novices and unlike the previous stage where one builds outer layers of Qi, the cultivators of this rank must create and reinforce pathways inside the body for the energy to be contained and traverse through.

Core formation followed next but we won't go into detail about this one yet, just know that anyone that reaches this stage can be considered an elite of sorts.

Nascent soul would be the next higher rank with very few ever actually achieving this, but once someone does then they can live for thousands of years as long as they can avoid any conflicts.

Elder Qez is one such person having achieved this rank.

It is very possible for Nascent soul cultivators to out number core formation cultivators simply due their long lifespan, but that would require a level a peace rarely ever seen in history.

After that is the highest stage currently known to those in the final edge sect, Deity transformation.

That stage simply too far off for us to talk about currently.

Bran Ai and Kiara are in the first stage with Kiara being closer to the second stage then Bran Ai was.

While Kao and Man-Shik are in the Second stage of Qi gathering.

For kids this period of time was the most important for their future growth.

If they can successfully rank up to foundation establishment in less then fifteen years they will have a major advantage in the future.

Otherwise if they reach their twenties, every year after they fail to enter foundation establishment the spiritual veins in their bodies will become more stagnant.

Spiritual veins will not stop gathering energy it stops expanding and retaining energy.

For this girl and boy whom had already achieved the third stage of Qi gathering at the young age of four and five respectably, it was a gift of heaven.

"We will have to stop here for today. I suggest none of you attempt to approach these two with the premise of becoming a master and disciple, none of you are worthy" elder Qez looked to the crowd.

"What! You may be an elder but that does not give you the right to interfere beyond this point! This is the disciple acceptance ceremony, it is for us to choose disciples!" One of the spectators raised an objection not fearing the elder in this moment.

"That is why it was a suggestion" elder Qez simply said and stood to the side.

Both the girl and boy looked a little frightened, how should they act in this occasion if not with fear?

They had no idea why this old man suddenly appeared or why those watching seemed to be angry but they could tell it was about them.

The spectators had been driven into a frenzy not caring for the elders position.

Had they not come here today to recruit a disciple?

If people missed out today wouldn't they be seen as fools in the future?

They had the insight to come here today, why would they not take a chance at fate?

"As elder Qez has assisted me here we can now conclude the test" Aakriti clapper her hands twice, the soft yellow light of the formation dimmed and the sand near the children fell back on the ground.

"Now then I will hand all of you a little green stone that I want you all to hold onto, I will teach you all how to use it" garbing a little bag at her side she tapped it a few times and out flew 213 small green stones.

A stone headed straight stopping in front of a child's face, the little kid grabbed the stone out from the air holding it in his hand,

Inspecting the stone he didn't see anything odd about it, it was just a normal green stone a little odd but nothing special.

Not every child had seen jade before after all it wasn't exactly common everywhere.

"Okay now that I've given you the stone, I want you guys to do as I say. First grab the stone with two fingers with one of your hands, then instead of gathering energy like you usually do push that energy onto your hands and into the stone" she made sure the the children could see her action, even going so far as to use a visual spell that mimicked the flow of energy in a way they could understand.

"!?"

"?"

"Wha?"

"That's easy"

"Like this?"

About a third of the children seemed to understand how to do it, the others needed a little time.

Bran Ai tried to to as asked.

'How do i move the Qi around, I can't really feel it or even really see it with my eyes open'

He closed his eyes feeling his surroundings, the air hitting his face the hairs on his neck standing alert for the slightest movement.

in the darkness allowed by closing his eyelids in the sunny final edge sect, he envisioned something moving.

Bran Ai couldn't exactly see spiritual energy, he could barely feel it as is.

Just like the vast majority of kids starting for the first time or adults that had an opportunity latter in life, he could only visualize what he believed it to be.

In the end spiritual energy is fickle, it may a times be right in front of you only to snub you only to come back later and help you.

If spiritual energy did not want to be found then it wouldn't be found and if it did it would seek out the person who calls for it across space and time.

While spiritual Qi could break the laws of physics with relative ease, it did not mean it was easy to control.