Reason for Rewrite

Well, I found out I focused too much about the character interaction rather than the MC with his weapon which was the main reason for his travel also I decided that I tweak some stuff to make the story more appealing. Well, another reason for the rewrite is I messed up some part of the original story. So it's not salvageable, the relationship between MC and the others are kind of shallow with no apparent sign of being a close friend.

Also Rewriting this made me realize how bad was my first novel before rewriting it whole. The story is full of plot holes :3