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The Point Legacy

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What is The Point Legacy

Lee la novela The Point Legacy escrita por el autor MasterOfTheCouch publicada en WebNovel. PLANET EARTH in the year 2020,The ground shakes with a heaven sundering roar, a massive figure is seen in the vast skies above, the figure both stationary but omnipresent. A voice thunders, like the m...

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PLANET EARTH in the year 2020, The ground shakes with a heaven sundering roar, a massive figure is seen in the vast skies above, the figure both stationary but omnipresent. A voice thunders, like the massive roar of the inimitable tide, "You have been selected to represent me in 'The Games'." It sounds almost displeased when it utters the word "selected". "Brace yourself and say goodbye to the little attachment you have to your planet, for never will you see it again, unless...." Then the lights went out on a planetary scale. The world that Raj is sent to is one where people get stronger by absorbing energy from different sources. Watch as Raj uncovers the secrets as to why he was sent here. Disclaimer: May contain strong imagery and emotions, also contains violence and blood. This is a completely rewritten plot from my original novel, so old readers should read this too.

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MasterOfTheCouch
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Have to give myself a four because I write very slowly and thus cannot update very quickly, this really pains me because when I write a novel I want it to be a story that I love, something that I myself would love to read. If the novel doesn't fulfill my exacting standards, I am usually harsh in my criticism (although I don't like to be mean, so I usually don't leave reviews in novels that I did not enjoy) So, here goes... It might be a bit too early to rate my story development, character design and world background but I can review my writing quality. I take great pain to deliver a reading experience that I hope is grammatically error free, I love to add semi obscure words to at least challenge a readers vocabulary, if you don't come out of a book without learning anything, then what is the point? I do limit myself to not make the book full of flowery language as I firmly believe that a book which cannot be enjoyed by everyone regardless of their understanding of English just becomes pretentious (some people might fight me on this point but this is what I believe in) I cannot rate my character design, story development and world background yet as I am only on chapter 5. I will update this review once I have written more chapters. P.S - If you did not agree with some of the points I raised, feel free to reply to this with your argument. I do love a good debate, as long as it doesn't devolve into an all out brawl.

Gomaschori
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These five chapters have hooked me in and made me look forward to the world that will unravel in the further chapters. Excited to see how this story progresses.

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