The Hacker Girl

Gostei muito de forma com foi escrito, e tema que a historia aborda. E também a construção dos personagens. Espero que grande aventuras aconteçam, e que Algo aconteça entre Naomi e Tatsuo.

First of all, I want to apologize first if I sounded too harsh. I like stories with Japanese settings like this because I myself like manga, anime, and J-drama. I can imagine their reactions and how they talked from how you write them. But there were many grammar mistakes. It wasn't that bad and readers could still figure out what you wanted to convey in the sentence. Major points to fix in my personal opinion are: One, I suggest using quotation marks instead of dashes and tidy up the dialogue. Which one is the words they're saying, which one is the action they're doing in between, who spoke it. It will be easier to distinguish them and put them properly in the paragraph using quotation marks. Two, pay more attention to the pronouns. For example, the author used 'he' when mentioning the MC from time to time. Check who are you referring to in that sentence and make sure you are using the correct pronouns. I'm sorry if I sound too lecture-ish, but I hope the author can improve your grammar and get more readers because the story itself is good. I use Grammarly to make sure my grammars are correct, so you can try using it too. Keep up the good work!

The story looks promising. But as most reviewers have already written. The grammar part is a big turnoff. I recommend you use Grammarly when you are writing your chapters. It is not 100% accurate, but it corrects at least 90% of your mistakes. Another option in case you are writing on your cellphone will be writing the chapter in word, so their autocorrect can mark your mistakes. Then, you pass it on WN. The story is pretty nice though, as I said at the beginning it looks promising. Have fun writing!

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I would recommend this book to those who like this genre. However, there were certain grammar mistakes but it was still fun to read and is still understandable. The characters were designed quite uniquely and the story has a vibrant setting. Kinda pitied Naomi XD. But overall, keep up the good job Author![img=recommend][img=fp]

This is one of the rare romance stories that I would recommend even to those, who usually avoid the genre. Despite certain grammar mistakes, The Hacker Girl is easy to read and fun to follow. It will charm you with a cast of quirky characters and a vibrant setting. The main character gets kidnapped a bit too many times in the story (poor Naomi really should watch her back), but the mess she causes every time propels the narrative forward.

Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, it just makes you wanna go back and digest every word one after the other. This book is definitely worth it.

I like the story. But there are a lot of technical problems with the writing. Still, if you're just looking for an engaging story and good world building it's still a good look.

The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read

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I really love the female lead, Naomi, as it's easy to understand her and her emotions. The story is well written .There are a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there as I read the chapters. I would suggest you to use Grammarly, an app that helps you fix grammar and spelling mistakes .I use it too and it's really helpful. Overall, I'm definitely keeping an eye on this novel. All the best ❣️

I find this story very endearing! The FL's mind is a cute mess😂 The pace is good and characters are well made. As for the writing quality, I see the efforts of the author in improving their writing[img=recommend] One thing I could suggest is use Grammarly to assist you in writing. This one will definitely stay in my library!~

The story matched with the cover plus the title, and it gave out a Japanese manga/novel vibe to me, but there were many errors here and there, which kind of confused me. The concept of a hacker girl is really cool, but her backstory was a bit unreasonable to me or it just didn't match. Leaving all that I said above, it is a good story that needs just a bit of improvement. Last but not the least All the best author *It may sound harsh but it's an Honest review*

I remember reading this story 3 to 4 weeks ago and being very disappointed with the dialogue and the grammar errors. To be honest, during that time I would have given your story 2 stars, however, you have improved your novel putting quotation marks, and improving the grammar. Of course, there are still a few grammatical errors that can be seen, however, I still do understand the essence of what you meant! I do encourage you to make the chapters a bit longer. I do see a lot of improvement in your work, congrats!

its a worth of shot reading this story there some grammar mistakes i have foreseen but it is part of the process, the story has a good plot and characters your book cover is also good ilove it![img=update][img=recommend]

Amazing book, the story is well written and the world-building is very well done. I could clearly imagine the scenes unfolding while I was reading this novel.

A very attractive and original story. I love your title very accurate to the content. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!

This writing style could be associated with how japanese-based translators do their work. There are no other problem and I really like the MC! But if someone would be to nitpick, the sudden change of tenses in the paragraph could make someone stop reading for a moment. But it's still a good story overall! 💓