Yi_Xi
I'm in College and I'm writing for fun.
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Yi_Xi16 days agoPublicado porDropping by to say I'm not on hiatus anymore [img=update] please visit here if you have time. Plus edited a lot of chapters. You're also free to comment and review!
- Yi_Xi3 years agoPublicado por
The plot was a little common but that's what makes this hard to write, it still managed to stand among the rest and although the delivery might need some improvement, it managed to caught my attention. 💓💓💓
- Yi_Xi3 years agoComentado por
This is good! 💓👏
- Yi_Xi3 years agoComentado por
Her name sounds so pretty!
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Yi_Xi3 years agoPublicado por
This writing style could be associated with how japanese-based translators do their work. There are no other problem and I really like the MC! But if someone would be to nitpick, the sudden change of tenses in the paragraph could make someone stop reading for a moment. But it's still a good story overall! 💓
- Yi_Xi3 years agoPublicado por
The story was very well written! And I suppose the writing style would also work perfectly if the author chose to write a comedy oriented novel. I really like this!
- Yi_Xi3 years agoComentado por
Is this supposed to be Imbibition? Or just Imbition?
- Yi_Xi3 years agoPublicado por
I like how the author changes their perspective! The premise was handled very well too. There are some cases where some sentences does not fit well with the paragraph but nonetheless, everything works fine. Good work, Author-sama!
- Yi_Xi3 years agorespondió a TheMortalGod
There are minor mistakes in some of the punctuations in the later chapters but it does not take away from the beauty of the story, great work!
- Yi_Xi3 years agoPublicado por
This novel has a very good quality except from some natural whoops here and there (from not having an editor I suppose). If you're the type to like very descriptive novels then I guess this is for you! I like the author's writing style very much.
