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Izuku Midoriya after his usual beating by Kacchan came home only to receive another scolding from his mother because he brought dirt inside the house so he was thrown out, it was just an excuse to see her lover, trying to find a place to pass the night he met an old man who asked a weird question but it was that question that changed everything mha/Genius MC/Crazy MC/

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AntiSimp
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My thoughts on this novel. Its okay. The power scaling is no where to be found. The powers are interesting, and the overarching plot seems kinda cool but here are my griped about it. So lets start with the power scaling. So Izuku is scaled to the "original one" or some sht basically God, and Izuku is 25% of this being, but barely star level (if you wank him that is) oh ya, and to clarify 25% in base. But he has a 36x form yet somehow, he isn't universe level. This would kinda be fine, IF, the author didn't end up adding characters like Zeno, the One Above All, Odin, and people like that. Like these people are relative to Izuku, yet they're all beyond common logic and easily above universal. (not to mention, that Aokiji, yes Aokiji ice man from One Piece, an Island level entity, is placed among these op bstards) Now characters, not much to say, its kinda Izuku but not at the same time, its like more angsty **** Izuku, he's still a chill dude, likes his music, shy with the ladies, but he's clear about taking revenge. My problem with the characters, is that he saves Uraraka right like in the original, yet the next day he's talking with his soon to be harem. He says he's quirkless and Uraraka doesn't even question him, when he literally did what original Izuku did, which is destroying a massive 10s of meter tall robot's head off. This isn't the only time either, they then have the tests, and Izuku throws the ball and Mina, nor Uraraka no Yaoyorozu question this. Oh ya I better be clear when I say throws the ball, I am talking he threw it so hard it broke the sound barrier and literally gave an error to the machine, which could literally out put infinity. Apart from that, the story is pretty clear cut, a few grammar and spelling errors here and there, but nothing too too serious. Story is developing at an okay pace, and the world background, is well, a fanfic with some higher being sht going on. So I give it a solid. 4 Star Writing Quality 4 Star Stability of Updates 3 Star Story Development 1 Star Character Design 3 Star World Background Not really my thing but might be yours.

Antonio_Aguirre_4423
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AzagalPlay
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Writing Quality: 4 stars, just some grammar mistakes here and there, nothing major Stability of Updates: 5 Stars Story Development, Character Design, World Background: 3 stars each So let me explain myself on the last one: The 1 million year button is a good idea in this story, the ruthless izuku is the best and the creator backstory is great. But there is too much forced plot, nerfs in the form of buffs for the opponents and just too much bs and plotholes: -the mc has 25% of the power of the fùcking creator of the omniverse but he struggled to fight a x10 powered up Surtur(from the MCU) -the mc has a godly amount of intelligence, of skills, of experience, of......AIs in his head..... but he couldn't stop the villains from escaping during the USJ incident and those are just the ones I can remember from the top of my head and here comes the point that will piss many people off: the harem is shít I like harem, but just the concept, because on this website there are well executed harems like in Endless Path: infinite cosmos, others come with a beta mc, and the rest is just shít. But you see, this one isn't even an average harem, this is complete shít, the mc isn't a beta male, that's great, but the mc is supposed to be cool headed because of the fùcking BILLION YEARS he spent training in a prison but somehow he's nervous when he has to talk to a girl (and don't tell me it's because he craves for social interaction after billion of years because that's just bullcrap, the mc is only nervous in front of girls, he acts completely normal in front of males) also the story is so fast paced, the interactions are either cliché/cringe or bland, the girls are just one dimensional and bland, there isn't anything entertaining. The harem in this novel works like that: you have nonsensical clichés (like Nemuri can't defeat average thugs that want to touch her, momo would have been raped without the mc's help as if this was canon, ochaco who was a shown as jealous in the canon isn't even ochaco anymore, the world is borderline AU just for the sake of an useless harem) and then they fall in love and accept the fact that they will need to share him if they want to love him. That's just proof of the lazyness of the author, he just wants a harem for the sake of it, it just doesn't add anything interesting to the story (the author was so lazy to write more interactions that he litteraly said in a paragraph chap 9 that their relationship advanced during a week to the point that they now all loved him) And somehow canon is preserved even though the mc isn't a weak wimp anymore but a planet busting entity (even tho he should be able to destroy universes easily if he has 25% of the power of the fùcking creator, you're not gonna tell me goku has something like 70% of the power of the creator now are you ? because the creator would just be weak shít at this point) My point is: this is harem but there is absolutely no romance, this feels like this was written by a horny te.enager having fantasies about being a god, getting girls as easily as breathing and having everything go his way without putting even the minimal effort into it.

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