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2020-12-23 01:21

It deserved 5 stars, but then the missions in the multi-universe began...

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My thoughts on this novel. Its okay. The power scaling is no where to be found. The powers are interesting, and the overarching plot seems kinda cool but here are my griped about it. So lets start with the power scaling. So Izuku is scaled to the "original one" or some sht basically God, and Izuku is 25% of this being, but barely star level (if you wank him that is) oh ya, and to clarify 25% in base. But he has a 36x form yet somehow, he isn't universe level. This would kinda be fine, IF, the author didn't end up adding characters like Zeno, the One Above All, Odin, and people like that. Like these people are relative to Izuku, yet they're all beyond common logic and easily above universal. (not to mention, that Aokiji, yes Aokiji ice man from One Piece, an Island level entity, is placed among these op bstards) Now characters, not much to say, its kinda Izuku but not at the same time, its like more angsty **** Izuku, he's still a chill dude, likes his music, shy with the ladies, but he's clear about taking revenge. My problem with the characters, is that he saves Uraraka right like in the original, yet the next day he's talking with his soon to be harem. He says he's quirkless and Uraraka doesn't even question him, when he literally did what original Izuku did, which is destroying a massive 10s of meter tall robot's head off. This isn't the only time either, they then have the tests, and Izuku throws the ball and Mina, nor Uraraka no Yaoyorozu question this. Oh ya I better be clear when I say throws the ball, I am talking he threw it so hard it broke the sound barrier and literally gave an error to the machine, which could literally out put infinity. Apart from that, the story is pretty clear cut, a few grammar and spelling errors here and there, but nothing too too serious. Story is developing at an okay pace, and the world background, is well, a fanfic with some higher being sht going on. So I give it a solid. 4 Star Writing Quality 4 Star Stability of Updates 3 Star Story Development 1 Star Character Design 3 Star World Background Not really my thing but might be yours.

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