Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
When he opened his eyes, he found himself in a desolate, abandoned, and cold world. After exhausting all available resources, he finally discovered a way to escape, but at a tremendous cost. He had lost his ability to speak, hear, and move properly. His unusual behavior led to several misunderstandings among the residents of Beach City. He couldn't understand why and how things had gone so wrong. ----- MUST READ: TS/gender-bender/gender swap elements exist here. Please, don't criticize the story by the genre. I'm making it explicit to avoid these readers. ----- This story is a slice of life, so the pace is slow. New chapters every three days. Formalities: The cover is made with AI; I don't own Steven Universe; I'm using GPT to fix any mistakes.
-Afterwards-
This story is experimental, and also my first story. I need your feedback to understand what works and doesn't work. The goal of this chapter is to collect helpful feedback.
The process is simple. You will comment "+1" in the line of the poll. Every comment is a vote. It will take less than 2 minutes!
# Reader Knowledge
1. I watched the original "Steven Universe".
2. I don't know the original.
# Protagonist
1. The protagonist is Enjoyable.
2. The protagonist is Boring/Neutral.
3. Different. Comment.
# Side Characters
1. The characters seem human to me.
2. The characters seem 2D and superficial.
3. Different. Comment.
# Story Tone
1. The tone is most time fun and light.
2. The tone is most time sad and dark.
3. This story gives me mixed feelings.
4. Different. Comment.
# Story Pace
1. I'm satisfied with the slow pace.
2. I'm unsatisfied with the slow pace.
3. Different. Comment.
# Multiple POVs
1. The multiple POVs are interesting and don't seem like fillers.
2. The multiple POVs are interesting but skippable.
3. The multiple POVs aren't interesting or even necessary.
4. Different. Comment.
# Reader's disposition
1. This story is still good, I'm curious for the next volumes.
2. This story is getting boring, the next volumes seem uninteresting.
3. I sincerely consider dropping (comment).
4. Different. Comment.
# Similar storytelling
1. This story reminds me of similar stories.
2. The concept of this story is unusual and far from my usual reading.
3. Different. Comment.
# EXTRA CHAPTERS / SIDE STORIES
Suppose you have any ideas for extra concepts for chapters comment here. Is there a POV you are curious to see? Or a different concept that would be good to see? Depending on the quality of the ideas they can be adapted to the next chapter. I'll save the good ideas for the next volume too.
THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
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