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SSS Rank Talent System within a System

A world where constant danger roams ready to devour any being. A world where sleeping peacefully might be your Death. A world where is peace never the first option and Humanity have shown its true nature of survival with the rule of the Jungle. Victor was a normal 21- year-old man, he grew up with his mother being his only family member as his father died during an accident, his mom being the only family he tries to collect money for her operation but that desperation lead to him getting into a trouble that cost him his life . Victor a boy died a worst death that's what he thought but fate had other idea. Suddenly a magnificient light was shined on earth and that started a trasmigration of all the living human but victor with his half death state also got trasmigrated but it caused error [welcome earthling to the world of chaos: Elerk star , You have been given a another chance to survive in this world as like your predecessor with the help of Eden system .] [...Host has been authorized ... connecting Host to the host soul... Host soul has been damaged .... no physical body... error system mal function ..........tutututu....] [Host new system available ... Searching New body ... Host has been successfully transfered] Follow the journey of victor with a system within a system. Can a body handle two system and make him the supreme and omnipotent its all upto fate... ................................................ For more information about novel and discussion https://discord.gg/D63REvX9Qb Readers as its my first time writing a novel so any suggestion is accepted and all the support is appreciated by Me. So don't be shy to follow my discord.

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Welcome to the world of chaos and death!

"Hold him down!" A bulky man with a height of 5ft10 was shouting as he is chasing a skinny man with the appearance of poor village boy with no additional feature.

"hah hah hah …hah leave me alone, please" said the skinny man with red blood all over his face as if the blood he was bathing in blood.

"You thought you could run away with the money" said the bulky man with a vicious smile.

"No this isn't what you think. It's been hard for me to earn money for my mom's surgery, So I borrowed money from you. I will return it in due time" said the skinny man as he is cornered in the alley way with no way to escape.

"Butt...but the time limit hasn't been reached there is still two months left" said the skinny man.

"Haha you thought I care about it, one month or two month or one week it's the same for me you said I will give the money back in few time" said the bulky man.

"Boss this shit ass looks skinny but has some feet to run this far with blood dripping" said a slim man with the age around of 23 with a metal bat and chains around his arms.

"This Asshole thought he can swindle my money and is giving excuse of his mother being in the hospital, I don't care if your mother dying or she is bitching somewhere I only want my money back also looks like you took money from other people too" said the bulky man with the eyes filled with greed.

"Please ...hu hu my mom is really in the hospital and they said they need 10,000$ to start the operation after I gave this money then I will do and work as you say for the rest of my life" said the skinny man.

"Heh no point talking to him just take that money bag and get over it, If he try to struggle just break his leg" said the bulky man.

"Hehe okay boss "said the three goons as they started to wave their bat and swing it around ready to break some bones for their sadistic pleasure.

As the three goons started to snatch the bag, the skinny man was holding the bag tight to his body, one of them got really angry and started hitting the skinny man with the metal bat. Sounds of a metal bat hitting a flesh sounded in the alley way with the blood all over the walls.

They finally stop after 2 minutes as the goons back away as they saw that the man, they were hitting has a big broken bone coming out of leg, his eyes black and blue with a bleeding head. They took the money bag and left the alley way not caring about if he is alive or dead.

The skinny man was on his last breather as he remembered his mother that is at the hospital in for her operation.

He opened his mouth to breath air as his nose have been broken but the chest caving inside with the rib cage bones scattered inside his body punctured his lungs as every-time he breathe more bone fragments are cutting inside his body and giving him excruciating pain. The only way he was keeping his conscious was remembering his mother that gave her all when his father died in an accident. His mother was all for him. His family, friend, teacher and the only person who loved him even though every one hated him for his looks and background.

He was regretting his decision to leave her alone while he was going out with friends that only took advantage of him. He was always the topic of laughter for them but his only thought was to survive in the college and that can only happen if he blends with them.

But reality slap a person harder than it looks. He later found out they were the reason for all the bullying and mental harassment he got in the college. They were the one who spread the rumours about him harassing a girl in the private, that rumours broke his reputation and made him the center of hatred for all the college students. He even got suspended from college and his career was basically over. One justification of the girl was all it needed for his career to over in a single day.

The skinny man thought of all this memory in just a few second. In his mind he said" If I have another chance in life, I will take good care of you mom "as he was getting scared of death because it means his mother too will die with him.

The skinny man said in a hushed voice which was barely listenable "ahhiii ddon't waantt to diie… ssomewann savve mee" with tear in his eyes with regret of losing his life and regret of not getting to avenge himself from the wrong accusation and beating the shit out of that girl who gave wrong testify.

His last breathe that was on his mouth got stuck as he looked in front of him in shocked as he thought it was an hallucination but at that same moment in the world of blue star a bigger shock was being send through the peoples as they stared at the sky with horror and terrified looks on their face.

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