Sanguine Paradise

Is the mc really a mosquito or does mc has any humanistic parts in his body if not I dont think I will be able to read can you tell me author. Thanks for you efforts.

First few chapters when the main character is a mosquito are well written, but as it progresses into his first humanoid, the development becomes somewhat forced. The main character’s actions feel a bit too unnatural for his moralities unless there are some more elaborations to his actions because all until now, he’s been acting in a way to maintain his cold persona while there isn’t much clear reasons or details to why. It somewhat eased after his duel, but it still feels a bit too fast, especially on how the speed of his evolution does not complement his interactions with the world. Compared to his first interactions with humans, although not direct, is quite hesistant while his later interactions with humans seem a bit too “toxic,” if that is the right word. It’s like he took a complete turn in his moralities, which is understandable after the Mauling, but doesn’t make up for most of it because it only mentions how he have become more mentally challenged than morally challenged, like his interaction with Lily and the human who dueled him. It highlights that he is not morally challenged while his interactions with the mercenary group with Merelyn emphasize how it is quite right to kill despite not having any conflicts, or intimidations. The writing style is quite unique, I guess, the confusing part about the dialogues is the “Me” part. I think it would be better with “I said,” or otherwise emphasize it in third person through using the person’s name than in first person. Releases are slow, but stable, so there is not much problem with that currently. The characters are well-made except for the main character, but also not really. The main character just lacks awareness of his own moralities and philosophy, or otherwise, does not express it consistently. It’s like he has a split personality. The story is quite young, so there isn’t much expectations for the structural world, but the story exceeds it so far. It might change through-out the story, and to be honest, although it has some flaws, it is still a lot better than the overrated, “My Vampire System,” or it shouldn’t be compared with in the first place because it is like comparing trash with goods.

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story was awesome to chapter 35 or so... after it story crashed down with face to ground so bye bye................,........................

Couldn't wait checked out your work on another website, and i must say it's so well thought out. the pacing of the story, the way you jusy perfectly flesh out characters. I noticed with this author everything that happens, happens for a reason. Although people are gonna find the "prisoner" Ark kind of annoying it's well needed for the mc, think of it like training for him. (!!WARNING!!) Author is a well known on his other website for his sadistict ways, leaving the most painful and torturing of cliffhangers READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. Besides that it's definitely worth a try. :)

no complaints. non human MC trying to build a kingdom while picking up friends and lovers along the way. dope grammar and all that shit. only thing is, I hop author spends more time describing MC after evolution

This is absolutely amazing novel!!! The main character only have two things that is unique for him in magical world and that is able to choose which one he wants to evolve and buy a skills from a shop in system. The main character is not a beta and he doesn’t shy away from killing humans. He would kill them if they’re in his way or they will benifit him but he wouldn’t blindly kill humans for no reason. Btw so far, everyone have a system so the main character is not that special but he’s lucky to choose which to evolve and buy a skills in reasonable requirements that needs to be met otherwise he just have to wait to grow. But I’m not sure if I’m right if everyone have system so let me know before I find out if they do or not. It just makes sense if they do. Thank you for the amazing novel and keep updating more chapters!!🎉🎉

i think this novel needs more support,it was nice reading exprience and was smooth flowing story...... ‐-----------------------------------

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I'm surprised you brought it to webnovel, but I guess scribble hub isn't really the best platform so fair enough xD. As for my review, the story is awesome, so far there aren't many things to dislike aside from the occasional grammar mistake. The mc is a guy who goes from mosquito to a more versatile form in quite a fast manner so those worried about it shouldn't drop, just endure a little. The only thing I disliked was the Mauling part, although I see it's necessity, so fair warning for those who don't like seeing the mc tortured, that part ain't nice for him. The world is interesting as a concept but since the story isn't too advanced in it's plot I can't say much more about it, I can only wait for the future. No issues with update stability on my part and for last, the other characters are well made, though my favorite shall always be Bob, because I find it hilarious to think about a future world destroying mass of muscles who's not that bright and is named Bob xD

Hello! I’ve been an avid reader of this book for a short while now. If you’re looking for a good review that will spell out the cons and pros of this novel, please keep reading. I havent gotten too far into the book, id say I’m in the middlenof it. First of all, I would like to give many thanks to the Author for the amazing story written, and I promise I dont have an agenda against you; that would be shameful of me huhuhu ;)! Pros; -Great world building. The story is set out extremely well, and it almost never gets boring. -Interesting system. It is cleanly detailed, with almost no holes through it. It’s more of a system, than a person which is a plus in mg book. -Hilarious MC with cold qualities. The MC is hilarious, and has made me laugh multiple times. ehm evolution seems painful.. hehe ;) -Multiple races. A variety in cleanly thoughtout races. Quite a large amount of them, most of which are new to be seen, created and made out. -Weak to Strong. Becomes powerful, and its cleanly designed to feel refreshing. As for harem, I don’t think so. Atleast not where I am. Cons; -A bit boring and slow in some parts. It had slow moments like all books. -MC seems to sometimes forget about becoming stronger. The MC’s main goal is strength, and yet sometimes he gets distracted from that. -Becomes more focused onto his lover, instead of himself. This is a personal opinion, I didnt like how the MC has almost forgotten his main goal. -Slight tad bit too much of romance. MC is too into his head about his lover. Everytime he looks at her he fauns over her, and slowly has become more centered around her. I dont mind this but it has become a bit too much for me. For example, most chapters consisting of her has her being teased, spanked, flirted with or just faunrd over. Anyhow this book is up to you read about. I prefer no harem. So author, please no harem! Thanks for reading, Author Greed!

The novel is written very well and the plot is interesting, updates seem to be consistent. Most of the story development is intriguing; There are interesting characters, skills and world building. I would recommend the first two arcs as they are done well. (I would rate the first 2 arcs 5 stars) While there are many positives, there are area that I found lacking and/or annoying. (There are spoilers below) The whole elf ears thing and my clothes got destroyed gets really repetitive on the the third arc. He gets strong reaction every time he is called elf, then just change the ears and I don't see any decent reason for that. The whole cloth thing also become repetitive and seem like just filler lines. The harem is another area that this novel lacks in, after the first one the second one took to long to get added not to mention she has around 5 chapters of presence/dialogue (I read till 175. Not to mention it took to long to add her that now she is not developed and there are many more interesting character rather then her, you can wonder why she even joined, any other human could take her position and perhaps easily be better. Maybe she should have been with them from the beginning of arc 3. It just was disappointing. Also for all that I am not humans anymore and killings, he remains so reserved in his relationship creating contradictions. Plus he tells her about his reincarnation. I also found the fights and plot in arc 3 a bit stale, the world building is nice, but his fights are rather repetitive and abilities seem cliche now. In the beginning Paralysis, getting strong through blood, shadows arts etc seem new and made the fighting interesting, but now they are turned to cliche-ish skills or it seems like a bunch of words making it sound complex. I would have preferred stronger version of previous skills. Also based on how the evolution changes him completely erasing everything from previews evolution he is built upon, then even the skills change and his character changes too, makes me wonder if the original MC is still there and now he is pretty much a casual vampire with a system. (Final rating 3.6)

hey bro....chapter 88....I think u forgot he had no eyeballs.....so how did he read all them books n do all that stuff.... LOL!

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just done with the latest chap ,138, and I would say this novel is well thought. I've actually binge read this as I can't get enough.. unique writing style and world background and a pretty interesting mc. so far so good. good job author

This story was really good and was one of my favorites on Webnovel and I used to always check if it was updated and it’s sad that it looks like you have dropped it. Can you please tell me if you are going to continue it or why you dropped it? It was one of and still is a favorite of mine.

The novel is fine upto his human transformation. But drops in development quality around chapter 28, and finally you start despising the character around chapter 42. If you came here for something inhumane after seeing that it's a monster reincarnation genre, you're not going to like it. The character has mood swings, portrayed as a wannabe conquerer but fails at it. Arrogance is Chad china level, but no power to back it up, relies on plot armor. Basically a wishy washy character.

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Really like it, don't normally post reviews but I just want the author to know people like their work, so they don't stop writing. __________________

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