lil_bitch
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2019-10-03 Se unióCanada
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lil_bitch2 years agoComentado porWhy would he do that?
- lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
What did he reply to?
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
Next chapter when?
- lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
Nice chapter. Don’t get deterred by neg comments.
- lil_bitch3 years agorespondió a MarquisofHell1
I agree with the idea except the last part. Making his seed taste good eill ruin the realism of the novel that come here for,
- lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
Development is good. No rush. The whole appeal of this story was “naturally” developing a relationship. Chemical manipulation destroys it. Just keep doing what you’re doing and don’t doubt yourself. Good job.
- lil_bitch3 years agorespondió a Photosphere
There was no useless content. Everything set the mood.
- lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
A shame it was dropped
- lil_bitch3 years agorespondió a
Why would you want that? If you don't got s.th good to say, say nothing.
- lil_bitch3 years agoComentado por
Either say 'there was a lot more detail' or 'there were a lot more details'.