Rise of the War Demons

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I liked the Fanfic, it is not common to have a 'dark naruto' because it is very much of the character and it is easy to find flaws in it, but you did very well in the construction of your character, with some errors of continuity, but I simply ignored it because the rest it was very good. With the rest of the characters, and their personality change is very consistent, continue the hard work. The UA of this fanfic is expanding and in a very good way in that (my opinion). I think the sin of this fanfic is the lack of regular updates, but it wouldn't even work as a sin, after all, when you force something, it usually doesn't work, especially when it depends on creativity. Congratulations and thanks for sharing this Fanfic.

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nice story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I haven't read the story far enough but I must say the first chapters was kinda good 〜(꒪꒳꒪)〜 ..,...............................................................................................................................................................................

This is good I usually don't read one's without his memories but this one was good.

Congratulations, well done characters, actions have an impact on the world as a whole. I really liked it, congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I love your work I can’t wait for more and it’s strange there isn’t more reviews/people reading this. You should advertise more

so a smip