Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.

Would have preferred if he was just transferred with the Sharingan and taking on the last name of Uchiha instead of the demon slayer world having actually an Uchiha Clan. It would have atpeast made the story simple and have him more be creatice in concealing his power or trying to explain the sharingan. The wholw Hyuga and Uchica clan existing just feel forced.

Well to start the prologue is rubbish and unnecessary, the uchiha powers that he asks for were already in the world and the talent they give him is inferior to the yoriichi, I might as well have given him this talent and he would be superior to the main character you have. Despite the fact that with the sharingan he should have an advantage, he is always cornered and on the verge of losing, if you wanted to even fight, do not put the "dominated" tab. You did a good job handling things outside of the canon timeline, the romance isn't bad, the protagonist's personality is quite fanatic at times, other than that it's okay and the characters' personalities feel quite natural to the cannon (good job). . Well, if you decide to do another Demon Slayer fic after this one, here are some ideas: it doesn't include God, that creates a lot of holes in the script in the long run, it introduces another romantic interest, Shinobu and his sister are already over-exploited (and in Personally, I always like the rest of the girls more than her) for the ability to cheat, use the talent of yoriichi (that guy prolonged his mother's life without knowing medicine and was superior to a fencing master since he was little) another power that you can use is the hamon (JoJo's Bizarre Adventure) that would leave you super dominated and finally you would not make your protagonist so obsessed with the canon "that if I save someone, I keep things the same".

I may be shameless but I know this story is not a full 5star yet.I will try to write better but I hope to anyone that read it to enjoy what my imagination was able to conjure.

3/5 The writing quality is better from the original but still bad. The story development and character develop to side by side and I don’t like how it’s going. It’s basicly an op reincarnation fanfic, nothing else. The mc has sharigan only upto three tomoe but can copy breathe types and movements, uzumaki body which allowed him to do like 300 push-ups at 9yrs no prior training, super healing, he magicly gets jutsu from his mindscape. It’s absurd how op the mc is, the author then included rengoku as a side character and had his strength massively increase from the cannon just to have a companion for the mc. The mc is making changes to cannon and yet doesn’t build the world to accommodate the butterfly effects. This writing isn’t anything special it’s decent but not good. There is nothing complex about it, very 2 dimensional.

Grammar is atrocious. Also, the author is trying to keep the mc from being OP as much as possible. Which is VERY disappointing since I came here specifically due to the #Overpowered tag. I regret adding this into my library since I was excited to read it due to the overpowered tag. As you know, the greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment

⚠️ Grammer is horrible! main reason I left Other then that, the novel isn't too bad, it's got its ups and down and the plot is intresting and engaging but the atrocious grammar makes this novel impossible to read

So the grammar isn’t the best but that’s not something i really care about, the only problem I had with the story was that it was meant to be a overpowered main character story but he keeps getting nerfed by the author. What’s the point of adding an overpowered tag to the story when he’s really not powerful? He was getting beat by an uppermoon and even had to go all out and another thing was that he supposedly had the highest talent but it’s quite obvious that he doesn’t.

There are serious problems with the powers of the mc, the background of the powers, the stupidity of the god and the personality also requires improvement. Other than that, you did a good job building the story.

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Let me start by saying that the concept of an OC being reborn in the Demon Slayer universe as an Uchiha is quite intriguing. The author's ability to create a world that blends both universes seamlessly is admirable. The storyline is captivating and keeps you engaged throughout the entire story. The character development of the OC is well done, as we see their growth and how they come to terms with their unique abilities. The interactions with the other characters from Demon Slayer add a nice touch, giving the reader a sense of familiarity while exploring a new concept. The writing style is fluid and easy to follow, with a good balance of action, suspense, and emotions. Although there are some minor grammatical errors, they do not detract from the overall enjoyment of the story. Overall, I would highly recommend this story to any fan of either the Demon Slayer or Naruto series. The combination of the two universes and the well-crafted OC make for an enjoyable and entertaining read.

Grammar is ehh

Empecé el ff hoy y por lo que estoy leyendo tiene un ritmo rápido, no me desagrada y la verdad le daré la oportunidad Pddt. Agregó a la biblioteca

This going be a short review. Let’s start with the grammar. It’s bad . It still readable but if you like doing audible. It’s better for you just to skip this novel. The Plot is pretty average and the characters design is decent. Anyway I’m tired 🥱. Thanks for your work author. Keep working on your grammar and good luck.

umbis it just me or is the description for the novel saying it's demon skater????

i like this story so much , the story development was good .

nah. dropped. the concept is good, but the execution is pretty bad. need some improvement on grammar as well

the over all story is good though you may need to think about taking a editor due to the many spelling mistakes and the formation of sentences the story was fine thoug you should focus on making your dight scenes better and your romance was subpar at best though it was good for a short read

I guess I liked this novel, even if I didn't finished it yet. Well, the main problem is the grammar, but I trust the author will improve or at least keep at this level, because It still bothers me but not too much. So even if the mc is not that overpowered, he IS still pretty strong, so I would give it a 4/5

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