Pilotfranco

Indeed but the mist village is broken af too, they have multiple elemental kekkai genkai along side physical kekkai genkai like turning into water and the bone one too and 7 special ninja swords the can make jonin elite jonin by using them, plus they live on an island so their resources and land has extra protection to bring attacked. If not for the author and obito the mist would’ve been one of if not the strongest

Which is why he said it was troublesome

Ya for sure she has brute strength to spade but strength as a whole is overall ability in which madara was beyond everyone he’ll madara before becoming the 10 tail could’ve prob 1v1 kaguya idk if he could win as they only won by searing her and madara doesn’t have any jutsu to do that except make a new moon but still

+1

A kratos path could be interesting, use Spartans rage or sum could be call the heavens razer or sum as in the heavens destruction since kratos kills gods, not too sure on the mcs personality towards gods he distrusts them to a degree yet feels no reverence hate or any strong emotions so kratos might not work now that im thinking about it

So I’m off the opinion madara is stronger than kaguya they had no ability to defeat madara at full might whereas they did defeat kaguya while tired and they had enough energy to face each off at the valley of the end afterwards

Ya me too English isn’t my first language, the grammer thing isn’t huge stick with the simpler words it’ll go a long way. Ya so when making a op character there needs to be emotional struggle since he clearly won’t have physics struggle. You started the mc with no ties so no emotional bonds to target later for growth. There’s also the problem with the mc being to op, I understand the purpose of the boost is to make the mc the mc over mo fan. However, 4 elements per awakening, getting to choose the elements, a system with a guided map, and a mark that boosts everything with further shit makes the growth for strength minimal. While there is a long path from primary to forbidden, he still has such a large advantage that it’s just to much. When introducing the mc needs more work to describe his looks, there hasn’t been any dialouge that builds the mcs personality or quirks yet. Both of which are vital early on as it allows for you to slowly change it to show growth

So there are some issues with character development early on however I love the fic, the world building is good, updates quick af 6 chapters in a day is wild. The grammer is good not perfect but good. I love quanzhi fashi (versatile mage) both the novel and manhua are amazing so whenever I see a fic I love them. Please continue with the fic and don’t drop it.

Thanks for the chapter

? From what I remeber he became a forbidden mage, strongest among humans but he was weaker than a lot of the emperor creatures still, so the novel ended with humanity still being prey of the stronger beasts. Loved it through and through but the ending was kinda disappointing, I figured it would end with mofan using his unparalleled strength to push back the monster so humanity could prosper without extreme danger.